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Author Name: Freela-la908 3 Comments
Date Added: January 24, 2008 03:01:54 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I Am Double
What is inside me is double And at the same time fake. This life has been a waste For my heart has made a mistake.   I look up into the distant sky where Setting clouds of crimson are spread. Everything has love's warm embrace Except my heart which is now dead.   I know my ideas are still young But it's one full of early pain. I don't even in this mind The other half has claimed my brain.   I feel like splitting in half So that I'll have a chance at love. I will have a new heart For this dead one will go to the above.   I know I may not make sense But inside I have it all worked out. I've made so many mistakes That I know what this life is about.
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Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on January 24, 2008 03:53:18 PM Report
Full of question and anxiety. When I was 15 I had not got a clue what to do with my life....It is all part of life to question. Just keep writing ;-)

It will all work out


Ali x

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 24, 2008 09:54:58 AM Report

I know I may not make sense

But inside I have it all worked out.

I've made so many mistakes

That I know what this life is about..... We all make mistakes.. but time will heal most of them...
Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeGlata on January 24, 2008 07:18:21 AM Report
Indeed, Mahala...Life is about mistakes and learning. Imagine, sweetie, how utterly boring life would be if everything were perfect and we had nothing more to learn from it?  The lessons, I've learned over the years, can be harsh...and  at times even devastating, but learning  from those times  will make you wiser and stronger and able to help others that will come along behind you that will be facing similar circumstances....

Hugs and hang in there, sweetie. You're an amazingly bright and caring girl. Just look at life as one big experiment...and learn what you can from it, then take those lessons and help everyone you can :o)



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