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Author Name: PremiumVIZUALENSEMBLE 9 Comments
Date Added: January 30, 2008 11:01:00 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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As these tears flow down my face, I think of you,
my heart, how it hungers for your touch so true.
In my mind is the only place I can seek and find,
my heart is too broken, for my love is blind.

How my heart aches for just one moment with you,
I would bring a whole new meaning of love to you.
Just one chance please, to show you my heart,
then if you can't accept my love, we can part.

I have had a thirst for you, that only you can quench,
as I stroll through your soul, inch by inch.
If a smile I do not see, as I make my way,
I promise to release you back to brighter days.

I will carry this hunger till we gather to feast,
upon each others souls, to say the least.
Just to hold you near to me, is more than I deserve,
but my heart would be fulfilled and my hearts song heard.

Must I go on alone with dreams as my guide,
hiding my heart, behind all these tears I have cried?
One moment with you is all that I ask,
to end this wanting, this heartache at last.

Copyright 2008~ Poetry by Penny

Author's Notes:
Song title~Have you ever really loved a woman-
By: Bryan Adams~Written by: David Van Beek
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Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on February 10, 2008 03:23:30 PM Report
One moment could truly make all the difference...... so very beautiful, it touched my heart.
Comment By: FreeGee on February 6, 2008 11:07:59 AM Report
Just want to give you a BIG hugs for this....

Comment By: FreeAngel on January 31, 2008 11:11:48 AM Report
Beautiful words Penny and felt the pain in this heartbreaking write


Huggles my friend an angel you are


Love Angelxx

Comment By: Premiumlionheart on January 31, 2008 05:07:12 AM Report
Moments whisk by in nano seconds...true love goes on forever.


Great poem M'lady.


Richard xo


Comment By: FreeBrad on January 31, 2008 03:43:31 AM Report
as I stroll through your soul I like that Penny..:) I feel the heartache...Very touching poem.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 30, 2008 11:52:19 PM Report
Penny, To love like this and not have that love returned... oh how it hurts the heart.. so sad and yet so truthful it sometimes becomes...
Whiching you happiness.Your such a wonderful poet we all love...
. hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on January 30, 2008 04:06:56 PM Report

This is so sad and the more one wants the one one needs, for better or worse springs to mind a wonderful write penny full of emotion.

Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on January 30, 2008 02:55:42 PM Report

I have said it before but I will say it again. You are a gifted writer.This is so heartfelt.

Love pours out with every word! Heartbeak ..........I can feel the tears as I read this. Wow
You are Amazing!
Yours ...............Fletch

Comment By: FreeGlata on January 30, 2008 02:16:59 PM Report
Ahh heart breakingly beautiful, Penny....VERY well written! Anyone that has longed for love can relate to this one!



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