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Author Name: Freejohncarter 3 Comments
Date Added: February 02, 2008 11:02:03 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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When the sunshine weeps

When the Sunshine Weeps


Let my heart be still my love
In the peace of your embrace
Take my soul this crazy night
Or let me leave without a trace
White stallions racing past the moon
A black silk bed of diamonds
Thunder crashing in my head
The sound of roaring lions
On a golden chariot of desire
In a dream that cannot be
I ride with you till daybreak
When the night time sets me free
I can only escape
When the black widow sleeps
In the dark of the night
Or when the sunshine weeps….



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Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on February 2, 2008 09:42:22 PM Report
I just don't know what to say???
How painful this message reads to us.all.. your words express so much of how you feel... I wish you well my friend ..
Hugs ~ She Whispers .

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on February 2, 2008 03:25:34 PM Report
This poem is infused with plenty of raw emotion John. I appreciate the descriptiveness you use to drive your point home.



Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on February 2, 2008 11:54:36 AM Report
Very nicely done John. Sad, but very nicely done. Joe


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