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Author Name: Freejohncarter 6 Comments
Date Added: February 26, 2008 08:02:59 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Earth

Earth

 

How quietly she bleeds
When eyes of seeds she opened
Long since passed her needs
Words are left unspoken.
 
She bleeds in the silence of our ignorance
Time is the longest kiss
The morning was never more beautiful
Than the night spent in total bliss.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on March 6, 2008 05:02:49 PM Report
Great feeling behind this, John..

 

"She bleeds in the silence of our ignorance"...I love that!!...len

Comment By: Premiumlionheart on February 29, 2008 12:58:11 PM Report
Very powerful. In such few words I read such power of emotion, feeling. Needless to say, I enjoyed

this write.

 

Richard

Comment By: FreeAdri on February 27, 2008 10:50:07 AM Report
True words. 
Good one. 

Adri x

Comment By: Premiumjohn j. carey on February 26, 2008 09:40:04 AM Report
john,I love the last verse the best..... the afterglow is a part of the sensual experince as well. john
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on February 26, 2008 09:24:33 AM Report
John
I am in awe at what a powerful poem you have written ...You  always speak right from your heart... This part overwhelms  me...((
She bleeds in the silence of our ignorance

Time is the longest kiss

The morning was never more beautiful

Than the night spent in total bliss.
 ~ Hugs ~ She Whispers



Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on February 26, 2008 08:28:42 AM Report
Ingrained with caring for her John
How we have abused the mother.

Ali x





 


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