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Author Name: Freequeens1 5 Comments
Date Added: March 02, 2008 18:03:06 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Infinite Dance

 

Standing poised on the edge of a dance,
Congruent figures balanced on tip-toe,
We shall go on and on, given a chance.
 
Primitive extremes, crude and refined show
We dance to the sound of the wind and stars,
Congruent figures balanced on tip-toe.
 
Itís impossible to disguise the scars
Of evolution, and we celebrate,
We dance to the sound of the wind and stars.
 
The revolution wonít be left to fate
Because our locus cannot be denied,
Of evolution, and we celebrate.
 
Infinite wisdom has us well defined,
Though we are finite in this ancient line,
Because our locus cannot be denied.
 
We are the fourth dimension of Godís mind,
Standing poised on the edge of a dance,
Though we are finite in this ancient line,
We shall go on, and on, given a chance.
Author's Notes:
Written for a contest on Allpoetry with a picture prompt http://allpoetry.com/contest/2393493
Word bank I used:  Congruent--coinciding exactly when superimposed.  Dimension--a physical property, often mass, length, time, or a combination thereof.  Edge--a dividing line or points of transition.  Extreme--extending far beyond the norm.  Finite--having bounds, limited.  Locus--a locality, place.  Revolution--sudden or momentous change in any situation.
Done in the Terzanelle form.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeGlata on April 4, 2008 07:47:36 PM Report
Grats gal! Very deserving!!!

Good seeing fresh blood in the awards section :o)

Hugs!

Glata

Comment By: Freesanddancer on April 2, 2008 05:33:26 PM Report
Beautifully written within the structure. It takes more patience than I have to stick so rigidly to a poetic form as this one.
Comment By: Freejohn carter on April 1, 2008 04:17:53 AM Report
This is superb more than worthy of this award.

                                                               John

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on March 3, 2008 04:16:09 PM Report
Why the heck is this celesctail poem in explicit??...Let the infane dance go on, Pen...I really like this...

"Itís impossible to disguise the scars
Of evolution, and we celebrate"   Hee hee...Oh, yeah, the scars of evolution are all over us...len

Comment By: FreeGlata on March 3, 2008 07:29:20 AM Report
VERY well done, Patty...but unless you're a signed in member at AllPoetry, the picture won't show up :o) so it doesn't have to be in explicit...

You did a beautiful job with this write...VERY beautiful!

Hugs...

Glata





 


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