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Author Name: Freejohncarter 7 Comments
Date Added: March 04, 2008 12:03:14 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Keeper

Keeper

 

Why wait for the mystery of twilight
The sandman left his stardust
A footprint leads the way
A single tread of hope
On this a golden day.
All that glisters is not gold
A distant memory
From the old
A word remembered
From the past
The past becomes the present
That passed
But I see a rainbow
A bridge to your heart
I slip and slide and glide
But the keeper is still sleeping
The keeper of your heart.
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Comment By: Premiumlionheart on March 6, 2008 04:09:18 PM Report
This is romantic poetry at its best.

You have a flair for this John. I can see a whole book full

of these poems of yours. Ever thought about it?

 

Richard

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 5, 2008 09:18:54 AM Report
A bridge to your heart

I slip and slide and glide

But the keeper is still sleeping

The keeper of your heart.... This is the heart beat of this poem...Beautiful written...
 Hugs ~ She Whispers


Comment By: FreeFilthy on March 5, 2008 07:34:41 AM Report
"The past becomes the present, that passed" I like the way that looks and reads. Nice one John.
Comment By: PremiumGlata on March 5, 2008 06:29:31 AM Report
As Adri said...it's intense, indeed!

Great work, John...

Glata

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on March 4, 2008 02:19:40 PM Report
I'm tempted to call you JC but I don't want you trying to walk on water just yet. *laughs*

 

I think the "keeper" just got a wake up call with this poem. Lovely work John.

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeDeAnna on March 4, 2008 12:22:40 PM Report
Deep and interesting, I enjoyed this immensely, great write,  DeAnna
Comment By: FreeAdri on March 4, 2008 12:19:22 PM Report
The heart is mysterious.  It feels the way it feels, without permission. 
I like this, the short lines makes it very intense.
Adri x





 


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