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Author Name: Freejohncarter 6 Comments
Date Added: March 07, 2008 10:03:53 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Sandpiper

 

 

Sandpiper

 

 

There is so much beauty in this world
From the simple flower
To the bricks so carefully placed
Hour after hour.
 
We are a creation of ourselves
From the moment of arrival
Until the golden silence
It is just survival
 
The Sandpiper twists and turns
From the heat that burns
Drifting sand and silent footprint
Is all that remains.

 

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Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on March 12, 2008 03:39:39 PM Report
We are a creation of ourselves

From the moment of arrival

Until the golden silence

It is just survival

 

I really like that, John...Original subject and just a lovely read...len

Comment By: FreeRichard Michael Cronin on March 10, 2008 04:30:47 PM Report





very nice work here John!


Comment By: FreeAdri on March 9, 2008 10:38:01 AM Report
Very well written, as always. Short and flowing, still striking. 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeLorraina on March 8, 2008 01:16:20 PM Report
This and your other poems show you have a sweet careing nature..

I enjoyed the simplicity of you deeper observation..thank you for

your sweet words  Connie (starlite)

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 7, 2008 01:14:35 PM Report
The Sandpiper twists and turns

From the heat that burns

Drifting sand and silent footprint

Is all that remains.

 Simply beautiful words you have expressed!! I love your poetry... Hugs ~ She Whispers


Comment By: FreeDeAnna on March 7, 2008 11:41:06 AM Report
    Isnt it the truth, what a nice write....Hugs, DeAnna




 


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