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Author Name: Freeseeker 5 Comments
Date Added: March 14, 2008 21:03:55 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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"Mike's Hard Lemonade"
In the acidic nature of life
I drink the nectar of my regret
by the glass full
with a toast to Pain
a cheers to Heartache
and a
here’s to you Second Guessing

When I begin to realize
what it means to own up to the moment
I switch to double shots of Reality
followed by a fifth of
there’s only me to blame for my choices and actions
and
I find it hard to keep down
I
choke on hurt, and mistrust
I
trip over my own heart while walking away
and decide to leave it there
I have no use for it without you
Author's Notes:
I've never drank any form of alcohol a day in my life but I thought it was a fitting metaphor for this write.
The "mike's hard lemonade" is a tongue in cheek of "when life hands you lemons".
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on October 19, 2008 10:20:50 PM Report
Excellent. I like this very much. Can relate to every line, unfortunately. Well done. ML
Comment By: FreeS on September 8, 2008 09:55:29 PM Report
very awesome metaphor
I friggen love it

no alcohol ever? impressive


Comment By: Freenoah count on June 21, 2008 07:17:07 PM Report
Rather liked the idea of remorse for drinking about remorse and sorrow.  Well, good luck staying on the wagon.
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on March 16, 2008 12:54:10 PM Report
I think we would all like to drown our sorrows with drinking. I like this Angelique and I'm sure many can relate. Joe
Comment By: FreeChris B on March 15, 2008 12:05:52 AM Report
It's a shame that Mike's Hard Lemonade won't get you to where you want to go. It's such a strange process.




 


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