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Author Name: FreeSensual Sorceress 19 Comments
Date Added: March 24, 2008 08:03:33 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Liberator Of My Soul

My night wields constellations in deft hands
so skilled at perforating my soul's shield
that each new bloody drop which courses through
these veins pays homage to their aptitude.
My creator commands the gates of hell
with ebony salvation whilst his eyes
stare far into the recess of shadow
to shine on dreams once so hidden even
myths mistook their existence for the truth.
You, who are darkness, haven and release,
long have I been adrift on your sea in
sedition, till within your realm, I found
my cradle, that towering castle fools fear.
You are the liberator of my soul,
your word is the conception of my breath.
When the insignificant blinds those who
misunderstand the power of such love
with prophets false and promises, I take
succor at your feet, richly nurtured by
fealty sworn, grace bestowed, glory achieved.
One hand entwined in my locks, your fingers
nimbly stroke my skin, and I am complete.
My selves take flight among those stars you rule,
to ride upon the thermals of your love.
Our bonds are the irons forged of freedom.

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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumRaymond Pinsonneault on September 28, 2008 12:19:13 PM Report
"That towering castle fools fear" a fantastic imagery beyond fear. Loved it. Congratulations

Comment By: Freetom on April 7, 2008 05:49:51 PM Report
congrats Jolen it is well deseved for such a wonderful and talented and gifted writer

hugs kisses

your friend

tom

Comment By: PremiumDavid Turner on April 4, 2008 05:58:44 PM Report
Just what I have always thought Jolen - getting a head outdoors at night is the only  way !-)

 

David

Comment By: FreeSharon Jorcil James on April 2, 2008 01:42:08 PM Report
Absolutely fantastic writing!!! I read and re-read and I remain spellbounded!!
Bravo on a truly deserving award!!

Sharon JJ
Comment By: FreeSteve on March 31, 2008 12:10:17 PM Report

Congratulations...on the award.


Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on March 31, 2008 06:59:16 AM Report

Ms S.S.:  another spectacular write from you.  Congratulations on this Feature Poem Award.


Lady D


 


Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on March 31, 2008 04:25:20 AM Report
Len's quick wit and sharp tongue! Be careful while he's down there though, of that tongue! LOL! Terrific piece of writing Sorceress, Joe
Comment By: Freejohn carter on March 26, 2008 06:45:55 PM Report
That Len is something else! This is beautiful Jolen. I think you just sent love into outer space.

                                                                       John

Comment By: FreePelagic Mind on March 26, 2008 06:29:19 PM Report

Fingers found wound upon the wand reveal therein appeal, earthrises and earthfalls, below the monks chant; and voices sing...Amen...


Comment By: PremiumDavid Turner on March 26, 2008 03:17:42 AM Report

"Love's not Time's fool, though rosy lips and cheeks
Within his bending sickle's compass come:
Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks,
But bears it out even to the edge of doom."


 


May Time take you both where you will, among the many turnings of the vasty Cosmos, to places few have seen and fewer still have known.

 

David

Comment By: PremiumMelanie on March 25, 2008 06:10:48 PM Report
Another powerful potion from the Sorceress.

Jolen, this is wonderful.

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on March 25, 2008 03:00:26 PM Report
Love and freedom....who could ask for better bonds? Ahhhhhhhh to be complete...*sigh*

 

Intense passionate penning Jody...your heart is on your sleeve here. Lovely! =))

 

~Barbara~ 

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 24, 2008 10:10:09 PM Report
Jolen,
 You have such a rare gift with your poetic words ..right from the start when you first came to this site ... Your style of poetry so intrigues the reader  that they must have more... Thats why you have such loyal fans.. So glad your posting again..Never leave us..
Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: Premiumlionheart on March 24, 2008 08:28:23 PM Report
Oh, Jody, here you are definitely working your magic again. 

You are something else !

hugs,

Richard

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on March 24, 2008 07:47:13 PM Report
You ARE gonna burn in Hell, of course, but when you get there, look for a tall redhead wearing a fedora....I'll show you around the dump.. This is just stunning wordsmithing, darlin' I have witnessed the birth of a great writer on this site...I bow to your talent, and while I'm down there........yereverimpressedfurball
Comment By: FreeSamuel E. Stone on March 24, 2008 06:36:43 PM Report
an interesting piece, one that I could spent a lot of time pondering pond...well done... Hope all is well in your corner of the world...Sam
Comment By: Freeb doneff on March 24, 2008 04:08:14 PM Report

Ah yes, the dark side..and yes, even the dark has good, has it's own light..
Lovely to be reading your work again my dear...
bb


Comment By: FreeSteve on March 24, 2008 11:42:51 AM Report

Intricately woven story that compels you to read the next line….. great imagery.


 


Comment By: FreeHenry M. on March 24, 2008 09:51:48 AM Report
You know what? This is just beautiful Jody, it is love that embraces the darkness and the light that lives inside every living person! Your words bring these qualities out perfectly.   Henry




 


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