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Author Name: FreeLastTempleKnight 6 Comments
Date Added: March 25, 2008 19:03:03 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Muse -- Free Verse
to see her
everything else
floats away
the vision of her beauty
my heart pains no more
my head aches no more
everyday life
it takes a backseat
sunlight is dim compared to her
love light that shines within
so much heartfelt joy
of this boy for this girl
in her embrace
a true eden it is
euphoria to experience
and to feel her arms
as she holds me tight
heaven is a place on earth
i have found
within her arms
sanctuary for my lonely soul
a true paradise
forevermore
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Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on March 28, 2008 03:42:37 PM Report
heaven is a place on earth

i have found

within her arms

 

There ya go.Heaven is where you find it, buddy..Lovely write, here...len

Comment By: FreeLorraina on March 28, 2008 12:43:34 PM Report
Well if this isn't love you have drowned in something simular hook.line,and sinker!!

Lovely..Connie

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on March 26, 2008 02:49:27 PM Report
Wow~
Come rub some of that sweet sugar off on me..gimme a hug!
Veryyyy lovely write my friend.
Hugs,

Tracie~

Comment By: FreeSteve on March 26, 2008 09:22:53 AM Report
Great means of expression....I am going to try that......excellent poem.
Comment By: FreeGlata on March 26, 2008 08:18:44 AM Report
I love free verse writes! They allow for the writer to completely express what's inside, which you've done so perfectly!

Great work here!

Glata

Comment By: FreeJoe on March 26, 2008 03:36:19 AM Report
Splendid write. Joe




 


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