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Author Name: FreeFLETCH 4 Comments
Date Added: May 03, 2008 11:05:01 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Open Up The Pain
Digging deep with my past
I remember well
Running on empty never lasts
I put myself thru hell
 
Feel the darkness swelling
In the recess of my mind
Fear of loathing breeds
I sense I am growing blind
 
Left alone with destiny
I am slowly being drained
Turn the key unlock the door
Open up the pain
 
The final days are coming
I feel it deep within my bones
Is this nightmare over
Am I finally going home
 
 
 
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Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on May 14, 2008 01:28:16 PM Report

I wanted to say something profound, but after I read Ali's comments I don't think I can add anything as true and poignant. I do find that I tend to bury my pain or apply a band-aid to some gaping aching wounds...not a good idea.


Fletch, I think we all can identify with these feelings and emotions, I especially loved this

 verse:

Left alone with destiny

I am slowly being drained

Turn the key unlock the door

Open up the pain

 

~cindy xo

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on May 3, 2008 06:13:15 PM Report
Fletch,
 The demons of hell always trying suck the life out of us.. Always turning and there they are... Darkness has so many spooky faces.
 You and Tracy have a good life..love will sooth the remaining fears.. Hugs and LOve ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeAngel on May 3, 2008 01:04:35 PM Report
Facing your demons is never easy Fletch. You are home where you belong in the arms of your loving wife love. The comfort you need is gained from your faith my friend

 

Excellent

 

Love Angelx

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on May 3, 2008 12:23:12 PM Report

Turn the key unlock the door

Open up the pain

 

I sense such deep despair here Fletch. I hope its not written from fact but if it is, remember that opening up old wounds is a painful business but many times a necessary one to true permanent healing. Same goes for opening doors. Confrontation can be an empowering thing once you take the reins

 

Ali x





 


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