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Author Name: FreeLastTempleKnight 7 Comments
Date Added: March 31, 2008 11:03:19 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Tears of a Star
  A star falls                  
  seemingly graceful     
  from a distance           
  like a ballerina           
  guided downward       
  to find a place             
  to come to rest            
  Though she falls          
  it is not by choice        
  Caught within earth's  
  unrelenting grasp        
  She's pulled down       
  so quickly                    
  she starts to burn out 
  Her light fades             
  long before her tears   
  reaches the ground     
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMISS_VEE on April 5, 2008 01:44:57 PM Report
Wonderful dreamy poem my friend, a pleasure to read...

 

love VEE xxx

Comment By: FreeGlata on April 2, 2008 01:07:35 PM Report
B E A U T I F U L!!!!! You're a wonderful talent, Joe...this is great.

Hugs!

Glata

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on April 1, 2008 04:01:18 AM Report
Theres only one word for this and its beautiful so very well expressed Joe.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 31, 2008 10:03:45 PM Report
 Your vivid lines are so expressed with each line...
 Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on March 31, 2008 06:06:43 PM Report
Perfect write~good work!
Hugs and much love,
Tracie~

Comment By: FreeSteve on March 31, 2008 12:44:34 PM Report
Very nice job with the topic.....great imagery.
Comment By: FreeWilliamGoldenpen on March 31, 2008 12:38:30 PM Report
Now this, I really like.  It paints a picture easy to see.  Nice one.

William.





 


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