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Author Name: FreeLordxSun 5 Comments
Date Added: April 07, 2008 02:04:06 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Last

(verse 1)
After the first time I saw you
to be with you was my goal
no cuts or tools will ever remove
what I feel for you in my soul

every second with you is great
you could make me smile and laugh
but that was the thing, you're so amazing
perfection isn't far off

(chorus)

(verse 2)
I tried to forget a long time ago
I learned that this can't be done
your touch and your feel just seems so unreal
but at least that we had our fun.

and I know for a bit that you hated me
perhaps it was a bad start
your beauty and smile, I'll miss for awhile
forever locked in my heart

(chorus)

(verse 3)
and if you ever needed me
you know i'd stop on a dime
I'm quite aware that i'll always care
I'll wait for another lifetime

and should you ever think of me
know that i'm doing fine
but I probably miss the taste of your kiss
and your eyes that were so divine

(chorus)
well I know that I'm not the only one
and yes, I know this for a fact
I'm not the first to love you
and I surely wont be the last.

(add to Last chorus)
No! I won't be the last
Author's Notes:
a song i wrote about a girl...
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLink on June 8, 2008 05:58:29 PM Report
Cool, you won for your first very post!

 

Keep writing!

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on April 13, 2008 05:39:17 PM Report
Kurt:  congratulations on your Feature Poem Award.

 

Lady Dragonwyck

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 7, 2008 08:39:11 AM Report
Kurt,
 First of all Welcome to our site!
 Second  just wanted to say this is a great son
a nice flow.
~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeAdri on April 7, 2008 06:23:17 AM Report

This is a great song!  I really like the honesty and the flow.  It is REAL, how things are. 
Stunning work!
Adri x


Comment By: FreeJose Noriega on April 7, 2008 04:51:46 AM Report
awesome song i love it




 


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