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Author Name: Freejohncarter 8 Comments
Date Added: April 08, 2008 16:04:45 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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When the sunshine weeps

When the Sunshine Weeps


Let my heart be still my love
In the peace of your embrace
Take my soul this crazy night
Or let me leave without a trace
White stallions racing past the moon
A black silk bed of diamonds
Thunder crashing in my head
The sound of roaring lions
On a golden chariot of desire
In a dream that cannot be
I ride with you till daybreak
When the night time sets me free
I can only escape
When the black widow sleeps
In the dark of the night
Or when the sunshine weeps.



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Comment By: FreeElysia on April 10, 2008 06:13:39 PM Report
This is a lovely write. Its haunting in a way. Wonderful choice of words. Really beautiful.


Comment By: FreeAdri on April 10, 2008 01:04:00 PM Report
You are a master of words. Beautifully executed.
Adri x

Comment By: FreeAngel on April 9, 2008 10:50:31 AM Report

I can only escape

When the black widow sleeps

In the dark of the night

Or when the sunshine weeps.

Your friend will I am sure enjoy this as much as I did John it was wonderful


Comment By: Freeb doneff on April 9, 2008 07:48:17 AM Report
I agree that this has beautiful visions in it, and what a sad poem it is!  I am not sure if your friend is happy, perhaps that is what you meant. One of these days, the sun will stop weeping, and he will feel warmth again. Kind of you to do this for him, you are a good soul John. Maybe some of you will rub off on him!
Beautiful post.
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on April 9, 2008 03:54:45 AM Report
This is indeed excellent work John and the word usage is second to none, a pleasure to read.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 8, 2008 09:08:23 PM Report
 What a wonderful poem for your friend..
Its great isn't it??
 Poems are inside our mind and something sets them free...
 Hugs ~ She Whisper

Comment By: FreeSteve on April 8, 2008 09:04:58 PM Report
John....excellent write....really great imagery....
Comment By: FreeSteve on April 8, 2008 07:56:59 PM Report
John....excellent write....really great imagery....


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