When the sunshine weeps by john carter

		Author Name: johncarter	8 Comments
		Date Added: April 08, 2008 16:04:45	Average Score: (Needs 2)
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When the sunshine weeps

When the Sunshine Weeps

Let my heart be still my love

In the peace of your embrace

Take my soul this crazy night

Or let me leave without a trace

White stallions racing past the moon

A black silk bed of diamonds

Thunder crashing in my head

The sound of roaring lions

On a golden chariot of desire

In a dream that cannot be

I ride with you till daybreak

When the night time sets me free

I can only escape

When the black widow sleeps

In the dark of the night

Or when the sunshine weeps.

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	Comment By: Elysia on April 10, 2008 06:13:39 PM	Report
	This is a lovely write. Its haunting in a way. Wonderful choice of words. Really beautiful. Elysia Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Adri on April 10, 2008 01:04:00 PM	Report
	You are a master of words. Beautifully executed. Masterful. Adri x Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Angel on April 9, 2008 10:50:31 AM	Report
	Beautiful I can only escape When the black widow sleeps In the dark of the night Or when the sunshine weeps. Your friend will I am sure enjoy this as much as I did John it was wonderful Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: b doneff on April 9, 2008 07:48:17 AM	Report
	I agree that this has beautiful visions in it, and what a sad poem it is! I am not sure if your friend is happy, perhaps that is what you meant. One of these days, the sun will stop weeping, and he will feel warmth again. Kind of you to do this for him, you are a good soul John. Maybe some of you will rub off on him! Beautiful post. b Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Graham Jones on April 9, 2008 03:54:45 AM	Report
	This is indeed excellent work John and the word usage is second to none, a pleasure to read. Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: She Whispers on April 8, 2008 09:08:23 PM	Report
	John, What a wonderful poem for your friend.. Its great isn't it?? Poems are inside our mind and something sets them free... Hugs ~ She Whisper Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Steve on April 8, 2008 09:04:58 PM	Report
	John....excellent write....really great imagery.... Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Steve on April 8, 2008 07:56:59 PM	Report
	John....excellent write....really great imagery.... Respond To This Comment