For the chance by john carter

		Author Name: johncarter	6 Comments
		Date Added: April 11, 2008 13:04:50	Average Score: (Needs 2)
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For the chance

Just you

For the chance

That your face

Might come close

Or brush the air upon my lips

Just to stand

In your light

Not to exist

In a twilight life

For the chance

That your lips

Might come close

And take away my longing

To reach you

To touch you

To smell your fragrance

Be in your place of happiness

For the time

When you can see

I can declare

What you mean to me.

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	Comment By: Cindy Bendel on April 13, 2008 11:07:23 AM	Report
	what woman would not want just these words said and felt for them? utterly romantic. made my heart melt....whoever your heart loves is very blessed. ~cin xo Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: lionheart on April 12, 2008 06:52:18 AM	Report
	Great little write John. I like work like this that can say so much in so few words. Richard Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Barbara Demasson on April 11, 2008 08:38:02 PM	Report
	WHEW.....this leaves me breathless! Stunning post John. =)) My one suggestion would be to remove "when you can see" Read the poem without it and see what you think. Maybe it is just my own style picking at me. Anyway, it is a little thought to consider. I love what this says and I really love the sincerity I feel in the "voice" of the poem. BRAVO! ~Barbara~ Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Angel on April 11, 2008 06:13:43 PM	Report
	Magnificent and so very tender. How lucky the lady to have such words written for her Love Angelxx Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: b doneff on April 11, 2008 02:06:57 PM	Report
	This was one of the most gentle poems I have ever read. Nothing buut softness, admiration and goodness to it. The title was excellent too. May she come into your life soon, and may she be holding up a sign that reads "Here's your chance! " (giggles) Good on you....beautiful works. b Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: She Whispers on April 11, 2008 02:04:28 PM	Report
	John, My someone has inspired your tender heart ..with such wishful longing... Soft lips to touch ... warm arms to embrace ...perfume to allure ... This woman must mean the world to you.. Your poetry is a love letter... Simply astonishing to read over and over... Hugs ~ She Whispers Respond To This Comment