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Comment By: Cindy Bendel on April 13, 2008 11:07:23 AM |
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what woman would not want just these words said and felt for them? utterly romantic. made my heart melt....whoever your heart loves is very blessed.
~cin xo
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Comment By: lionheart on April 12, 2008 06:52:18 AM |
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Great little write John. I like work like this that can say so much in
so few words.
Richard
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Comment By: Barbara Demasson on April 11, 2008 08:38:02 PM |
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WHEW.....this leaves me breathless! Stunning post John. =))
My one suggestion would be to remove "when you can see" Read the poem without it and see what you think. Maybe it is just my own style picking at me. Anyway, it is a little thought to consider.
I love what this says and I really love the sincerity I feel in the "voice" of the poem. BRAVO!
~Barbara~
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Comment By: Angel on April 11, 2008 06:13:43 PM |
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Magnificent and so very tender. How lucky the lady to have such words written for her
Love Angelxx
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Comment By: b doneff on April 11, 2008 02:06:57 PM |
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This was one of the most gentle poems I have ever read. Nothing buut softness, admiration and goodness to it. The title was excellent too. May she come into your life soon, and may she be holding up a sign that reads "Here's your chance! " (giggles) Good on you....beautiful works. b
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Comment By: She Whispers on April 11, 2008 02:04:28 PM |
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John, My someone has inspired your tender heart ..with such wishful longing... Soft lips to touch ... warm arms to embrace ...perfume to allure ... This woman must mean the world to you.. Your poetry is a love letter... Simply astonishing to read over and over... Hugs ~ She Whispers
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