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Author Name: FreeSensual Sorceress 24 Comments
Date Added: April 12, 2008 19:04:18 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Beanstalk

I cupped the stars in trembling hands,
until I, in jubilation, and overcome with pride,
forgot to weep for the sky’s blindness.
When the weight of grief broke through the clouds,
I haphazardly scattered them in the dust
along this dirt-packed, deserted road.
Where her tears fell upon them, and like magic beans,
they sprouted into a bramble-ridden stalk,
that, although it pierces my calloused hands,
I still try to climb to the golden dawn.



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Comment By: FreeSharon Jorcil James on June 12, 2008 08:00:29 AM Report
Keep reaching for the stars......even in the face of adversity. What a powerful message!

Splendid write and so deserving of the award. Congrats to you my dear!!!!

 

Sharon JJ

Comment By: FreeCathy on June 3, 2008 08:43:08 PM Report
Wow what a powerful poem Loved every word you have me begging for more
Cathy

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on May 14, 2008 02:42:37 PM Report
exquisite as only you can do J.

i always feel something magic when i read your work.

~cindy xo

Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on May 2, 2008 11:56:47 AM Report
I like to read this without 'her' in it. 

 

I like the message of hope here.  It is true the sky is blind and does not discriminate.     

Comment By: FreesHeRi on May 1, 2008 07:53:23 PM Report

congrats my friend


Comment By: FreeAdri on April 30, 2008 05:43:21 AM Report
Okay, this goes without saying, had to get a gold mark.  This is, like all your work, totally brilliant!  You are the closest to the real thing in poetry. 
Congratulations my J!! 
Love
Adri x

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on April 28, 2008 09:46:16 AM Report
Jolen:  congratulations on this Feature Poem Award.

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on April 28, 2008 03:31:38 AM Report
Your work shines.

Excellent expression.

Well deserved award.

Yours ....Fletch

Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on April 24, 2008 11:11:45 PM Report
That's just the way we are. Nice work, J. ML
Comment By: FreeSteve on April 24, 2008 09:44:23 PM Report
Wonderful imagery.......pieces of the whole laid next to each other creating a beautiful mosaic
Comment By: FreeHannah Mae on April 22, 2008 11:01:11 PM Report
Wow

 

~Shanna

Comment By: FreeLorraina on April 20, 2008 04:29:16 PM Report
Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder, Once out eye see our heart desires..But life intervenes nd we have to strive all over again.. It feels of heart felt strength and very real Lorraina
Comment By: FreeJoe Petro on April 20, 2008 11:58:07 AM Report
Love the last line Jody. We keep on striving, reaching. This is a dynamic piece of writing. jp
Comment By: Premiumlionheart on April 20, 2008 06:14:20 AM Report
If you don't shoot for the stars, you'll hever reach them, I always say.

Your writes are always so metaphorical they get into the mind and

work around. I love your work for that reason.

Hugs,

Richard

 

Comment By: PremiumDavid Turner on April 17, 2008 11:56:27 AM Report

Poor old Rapunzel - All that time waiting for a prince to come along and then she gets a princess! Well if she got youshe should considerherself a lucky girl!


 


David


Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on April 16, 2008 01:22:00 AM Report
WOW!!..Pride can be a killer, but mistakes can always be left in the past, if we choose not to repeat them..Onward and upward, darlin'. This is beautiful stuff..yereverlovin'
Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on April 14, 2008 01:54:27 PM Report
Truly inspirational...!
Comment By: PremiumMelanie on April 14, 2008 07:55:40 AM Report
This is very thought provoking and well written.

I enjoyed it immensely.

Comment By: FreeHenry M. on April 13, 2008 09:02:08 PM Report
When life rains strife down on you, you have to climb back up from the depths Jody. Your words here are a fine example of how it's done.  Henry
Comment By: FreeAngel on April 13, 2008 12:50:30 PM Report
We must keep on climbing J an excellent write. Hope all is well with you?

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: Freenoah count on April 13, 2008 11:39:43 AM Report
The night sky is all-seeing, and apparently so are you.  Fantastic write.  noah 
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 13, 2008 09:52:29 AM Report
Jolen,
 In our life with so many dreams in our mind....many shattered but still we climb to reach the top to get what we must have... How well I know of this struggle... You always find the words to express life.
Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeCeeCee on April 13, 2008 09:19:50 AM Report

Very creative idea of how to present hope, Jody...LOVE it!  It is going on my favorites.


CeeCee


Comment By: Freeb doneff on April 12, 2008 08:52:23 PM Report
There is no shame in seeing something beautiful and wanting it for our own. And sometimes, it may be a long journey to fruition, but every shred and slice is worth it. Keep climbing Sistah, if ya ain't there yet, I feel certain you are about as close as any one of us ever will be.
Beautiful work, from a woman that bestows beauty on this world every day..
Your loving BB





 


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