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Author Name: FreeCeeCee 13 Comments
Date Added: April 15, 2008 09:04:31 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Changing Jackets

My arms slide through the sleeves

of a light weight jacket of sorrow.

Its length shorter

than the yesterday’s

long heavy trench coat.

 

Spring sings outside my window.

I purposefully turn my ear

towards its sweetness,

straining to hear each measure of notes

knowing its lyrics have the strength

to warm my heart—
so I can take the jacket off. 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJennifer on October 12, 2009 08:53:17 AM Report
very good ! Nicely delivered!
Jen

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on July 7, 2008 11:27:36 AM Report
I like and appreciate the symbolism here

 

Ali x

Comment By: FreeAndy on June 19, 2008 08:23:59 AM Report
Very nicely done!
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on May 30, 2008 09:10:15 PM Report
I think you should change into a T shirt of happiness and throw them coats away for the summer.. :o)..len
Comment By: FreeS on May 6, 2008 12:36:38 AM Report
sweet poem !

Comment By: FreeLink on April 28, 2008 08:53:05 AM Report
That's such a lovely write! I drooled so much, my tongue's all clamped in the throat.
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on April 26, 2008 12:24:08 PM Report
I love the symbolism and message here Cari, terrific! Joe
Comment By: FreeSteve on April 24, 2008 09:39:02 PM Report

Winter's heavy coat cast off and replaced with spring's jacket.  Very nice.


Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on April 19, 2008 01:44:07 PM Report
Your inbox is full hun. =))

 

No Cari, the books are not on Amazon. If you want any of the books, (there are several but only 2 with my work in it so far) then I would have to collect the money from you and mail them to you. Let me know.

 

The 20th Anthology has 11 of my pieces in it. (one is a short story) The other book is a collection of the group's eight monthly writing challenges of which I contributed 4.  

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on April 16, 2008 02:41:10 AM Report
It sounds like you are well on your way...sorrow will soon be cast aside like a coat when not needed.       Nice~ 

 

Happy Spring girlfriend! *hugz*

 

~Barbara~ *listening for those same sweet notes*

Comment By: Freeb doneff on April 15, 2008 11:44:48 AM Report
Take it off, take it Alllllllllll off! lol, just kidding, the metaphor was great in this, and I think many people have Seasonal Affective Disorder through out the winter months. Makes every spring, a great one!
Nice job Cari..
b

Comment By: Premiumlionheart on April 15, 2008 10:08:28 AM Report
This is a great little poem. Sadness leaves with the dreary winter.

Its pretty much that way with me every Spring.

 

Richard

Comment By: Premiumjohn j. carey on April 15, 2008 09:15:24 AM Report

Cee Cee, nice writing , love the insight.john






 


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