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Author Name: Freejohncarter 5 Comments
Date Added: April 15, 2008 15:04:58 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Keeper

Keeper

 
Why wait for the mystery of twilight
The sandman left his stardust
A footprint leads the way
A single tread of hope
On this a golden day.
All that glisters is not gold
A distant memory
From the old
A word remembered
From the past
The past becomes the present
That passed
But I see a rainbow
A bridge to your heart
I slip and slide and glide
But the keeper is still sleeping
The keeper of your heart.
Author's Notes:
I should have put this under mystery.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on April 16, 2008 02:26:18 AM Report
Well you just have to make a loud arrival, that'll wake the keeper up. =)) Your poem shows hope. Nicely said!

 

I'm smiling because of the "about". You're smiling too........right?

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 15, 2008 11:40:15 PM Report
John,
 YOu always express your thoughts so well..LOve will find your heart
 Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeSteve on April 15, 2008 10:52:22 PM Report

I really like this poem…this is going on my list favorite lines....A bridge to your heart


Comment By: FreeSamuel E. Stone on April 15, 2008 06:28:55 PM Report
Very nicely done... enjoyed...

Best Wishes,,,

Sam

Comment By: FreeAngel on April 15, 2008 04:55:14 PM Report
Mysterious indeed John. A heart that is closed never experiences love.
All that glisters is not gold

Another chapter to unfold

 

Amazing write

 

Love Angelxx





 


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