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Author Name: Freejohncarter 3 Comments
Date Added: April 16, 2008 15:04:02 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Sandpiper

 

 

Sandpiper

 

 

There is so much beauty in this world
From the simple flower
To the bricks so carefully placed
Hour after hour.
We are a creation of ourselves
From the moment of arrival
Until the golden silence
It is just survival
The Sandpiper twists and turns
From the heat that burns
Drifting sand and silent footprint
Is all that remains.

 

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Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on April 17, 2008 03:01:22 AM Report
"We are a creation of ourselves"...and everything & everyone who touches our lives. Oh heck the funshine must be kicking in, just look at me finishing your sentences! *laughs*

 

Survival is one way of putting it I suppose. It does seem like a good word to imply struggle but what of the funshine huh? That isn't survival alone...it is warm sweet joy. I'll bet even the Sandpiper was happy before it got too hot. *smiles* Nice work John.

 

~Barbara~ *babbling on............and on* 

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 16, 2008 10:19:56 PM Report
The Sandpiper twists and turns

From the heat that burns

Drifting sand and silent footprint

Is all that remains.>>> Such is life!!!
 Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeAngel on April 16, 2008 04:18:28 PM Report
We need to appreciate the little things in life. We are all to busy complaining and not looking at the whole picture.Making a list of these appreciations daily makes us see just what we have in life.

A fantastic write John

 

Love Angelxx





 


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