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Author Name: Freejohncarter 7 Comments
Date Added: May 11, 2008 14:05:04 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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You

you

 

I waited for so long
Words are just words
Why paint them with a colour
That could last forever
A rainbow never stays
A butterfly always strays
The nicest thing
I ever heard
The sound of your voice.
On a quiet rainy Sunday.
And the moment
I needed you
And you were there.

 

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Comments:
Comment By: Premiumjohn j. carey on June 8, 2008 07:06:35 AM Report
great writng which made for great reading, john
Comment By: FreeAdri on May 15, 2008 02:38:31 PM Report
This still is a brilliant poem.
Beautiful. 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on May 12, 2008 01:20:14 PM Report
Exquistite! I stand back from promises of forever. Let us live in the moment. I love your colorful expressions John.

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on May 11, 2008 11:31:41 PM Report
John,
 A womans voice you needed to hear ....
either distance or so very near ...

You needed to know she was there
when you needed her the most
she is every where....

 To hold your heart in her hands what a blessing..
 who will wear your gold wedding ring.
all will be guessing

You inspire me...What can I say!!
Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeSteve on May 11, 2008 09:14:38 PM Report
Sweet and very real. A wonderful write.
Comment By: FreeLink on May 11, 2008 06:03:05 PM Report
Who needs sad love poems when we can have these! Great work!
Comment By: FreeAngel on May 11, 2008 02:23:00 PM Report
John this was so very beautiful. What every woman would love to have written in love.

 

Love Angelxx





 


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