You by john carter

		Author Name: johncarter	7 Comments
		Date Added: May 11, 2008 14:05:04	Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Category: Love

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You

you

I waited for so long

Words are just words

Why paint them with a colour

That could last forever

A rainbow never stays

A butterfly always strays

The nicest thing

I ever heard

The sound of your voice.

On a quiet rainy Sunday.

And the moment

I needed you

And you were there.

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Comments:

	Comment By: john j. carey on June 8, 2008 07:06:35 AM	Report
	great writng which made for great reading, john Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Adri on May 15, 2008 02:38:31 PM	Report
	This still is a brilliant poem. Beautiful. Adri x Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Barbara Demasson on May 12, 2008 01:20:14 PM	Report
	Exquistite! I stand back from promises of forever. Let us live in the moment. I love your colorful expressions John. ~Barbara~ Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: She Whispers on May 11, 2008 11:31:41 PM	Report
	John, A womans voice you needed to hear .... either distance or so very near ... You needed to know she was there when you needed her the most she is every where.... To hold your heart in her hands what a blessing.. who will wear your gold wedding ring. all will be guessing You inspire me...What can I say!! Hugs ~ She Whispers Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Steve on May 11, 2008 09:14:38 PM	Report
	Sweet and very real. A wonderful write. Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Link on May 11, 2008 06:03:05 PM	Report
	Who needs sad love poems when we can have these! Great work! Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Angel on May 11, 2008 02:23:00 PM	Report
	John this was so very beautiful. What every woman would love to have written in love. Love Angelxx Respond To This Comment