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Author Name: Moderatorhnk903 9 Comments
Date Added: May 11, 2008 21:05:46 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Looking at love from both sides
Him:
She's gone now, left my soul in tatters
All I see is her face, nothing else matters
What went so wrong? Why was I blind
Not to see the torment building in her mind
There goes life again, playing it's cruel game
Without her love, I'll never be the same
Just when we thought we had it all
Life intervened and set us up for a fall
Her hand fit in mine just like a glove
Only she knows why she fell out of love
I don't even know the reasons why
It feels like the sun has fallen from the sky
 
Her:
Boy was I wrong, I just couldn't see
This guy was completely wrong for me
Oh he had me falling for a little while
Until I found out he was worse than a child
A faithful, loving man he was for sure
But in the end, he was too immature
I could love him sure, even with all his flaws
Because he does have some talented paws
He knows what I like, yes he makes me feel good
But there's more to loving than some great wood
I can't get past the tedium, sometimes he's a jerk
I guess when all's said and done, he'd be too much work
Author's Notes:
Yeah, sometimes it's just the way it is!!
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeCathy on August 7, 2008 09:21:52 AM Report
Not many people could see both sides you are a gem to have written this amazing poem from both perspectives loved it every word of it Excellent write
.......Cathy

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on May 16, 2008 05:15:42 PM Report
If someone is too much work, then you're not really in love..The real deal doesn't require work to work. len
Comment By: FreeLorraina on May 13, 2008 04:32:22 PM Report

This sure reminded me of the song Henry..I guess this guy sure gets around, seems like most of us girls have had him in our lives at some stage........Brilliant stuff this Henry for all of us to relate to   Connie


Comment By: FreeSteve on May 12, 2008 06:23:02 PM Report
The two edged sword of love and relationships........you have good insight in to both people.... I think I dated that girl in high school.....! LOL  Glata?
Comment By: FreeAngel on May 12, 2008 01:04:02 PM Report
You talking about my ex Henry chicken? A fantastic write

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on May 12, 2008 09:30:13 AM Report
Henry,
 I am thinking back to that time...Let me see It's comming to me I Think?? GReat poem.... Thank you for your kind comment.. ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeGlata on May 11, 2008 10:24:04 PM Report
I think that I dated this guy in high school....? LOL

A good look at things from both sides of the coin!

Hugs...

Glata

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on May 11, 2008 09:58:45 PM Report
 

Hey...I think I may know this guy lol ...ok i'm just kidding!

this is funny but mixed with lots of truth too...you are great at conveying a story henry!

~cin xo

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on May 11, 2008 09:42:39 PM Report
Henry,

Good write! Looking at a relationship from both sides..pros and cons

~Tracie





 


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