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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 9 Comments
Date Added: May 15, 2008 15:05:00 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Love Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Timeless Moment
I was in the place between now and the next moment
 
A tight rope that you can travel in your conscious thoughts
 
Alone as waves of emotional stimulation washed over me
 
I was presented with a unique clarity of my surroundings
 
Time slowed to a stop as I carefully navigated through it
 
Your approach came like a series of still shots, click, click
 
My head turned ever so slightly, we exchanged glances
 
A sensual image of beauty drifting past like a dream
 
We were side by side and your gaze looked into me
 
Fear chased away by an incredible feeling of desire
 
Your lips were moving but I couldn’t hear the words
 

You smiled and I was certain we would be together

 

 

 

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Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on June 5, 2009 02:49:09 PM Report
"A tight rope that you can travel in your conscious thoughts"...loved this thought. In that time between now and the next moment people can connect on a deep level...they both feel it and show it. Nice despcription of how it can happen. =)) 

 

~Barbara~ 

Comment By: FreeGlata on May 28, 2008 01:03:13 PM Report
Loverly! Love on the astral level...Sometimes things are just meant to be!

Great write...

Hugs...

Glata

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on May 18, 2008 05:58:01 PM Report
You romantic dog, you...This is wonderfully stated, Steve...That timeless moment is well described. I was watching the story of Apollo 11 last night and one of the astronauts was commenting on the trip to the moon, saying that between the Earth and the moon was nothing, giving him the feeling that they had magically arrived, without traveling. What an experience those guys had...len
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on May 16, 2008 08:30:39 AM Report
The first two lines are a great opening, they lead into a terrific piece Steve.  Joe
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on May 15, 2008 08:47:06 PM Report
Steve,
 There is just something about them eyes once they connect... I love this.. you always tease our hearts... Beautiful emotions flow in your  whispering words...
 HUgs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: Freenicholas on May 15, 2008 05:14:21 PM Report
very passionate and well said

DHP......

Comment By: FreeAngel on May 15, 2008 05:11:57 PM Report
Beautiful feelings of love

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeAmy on May 15, 2008 04:23:45 PM Report
I agree with Adri...a very passionate write. I especially liked the opening line...It grabbed me.

~Amy

Comment By: FreeAdri on May 15, 2008 03:38:17 PM Report
Very passionate...  beautiful Steve. 
Love sounds glorious as you describe it.
Adri x





 


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