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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 5 Comments
Date Added: May 17, 2008 17:05:40 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Full Moon ~*~ Rapture

Naked black lace creeps like a  pearl  sea fog
  it breaths and covers the twilight skies
 blushing blazing face

Soon the waiting sky will be a velvet curtain
 with diamonds that sparkles takes their silver place 

This full moon of white gold  leaves me completely
breathless its glimmer all around

 I watch silk purple clouds streak across
the now black velvet silence
 with itís midnight diamond gown 

The reaching fingers of blushing night
 somehow reach inside my trembling heart,
and clutches it ever so gently,
with  strange feelings 

My ears listen to whatís being said
between the teasing moon and stars
everything is dancing and reeling

Dance of natures violins music
 as I watch the winking stars also play
 with the graceful happy moon
everyone is in tune

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeSteve on May 18, 2008 05:17:28 PM Report
Very nice and the phrasing is impressive.
Comment By: FreeAngel on May 18, 2008 03:15:10 PM Report
Wonderful my friend

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeAminath Agleema on May 18, 2008 02:24:44 PM Report
wow .. wonerful poem. It is extreamly beautiful.........It touches the mind of the reader.
Comment By: Freetom on May 18, 2008 12:52:23 AM Report
sensual romantic with amazing descriptions that dwells in the depth of your imagination. wow an amazing penning India

hugs kisses

tom

Comment By: FreeMujtaba H Zaidi on May 18, 2008 12:38:32 AM Report
What a wonderful description of the imperative experience your deep imagination perceived.... You are always wonderful, always in search of stealing some pearls from the beauties of nature!!! 




 


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