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Author Name: Freequeens1 4 Comments
Date Added: May 18, 2008 20:05:21 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Daylight Fantasies and Night Time Dreams
Daylight fantasies and night time dreams
Reveal desires for the one who has my heart.
They grow more fanciful when we are apart,
Like moonlit picnics beside country streams.
 
The images I create often steam
From the passion we had from the start.
Daylight fantasies and night time dreams
Reveal desires for the one who has my heart.
 
If only we didnít have to go to extremes
To share a few moments together that dart
Away swifter than a leaping hart.
In between times, they are all we have, or so it seems,
Daylight fantasies and night time dreams.
 
 
 
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Author's Notes:
Done in the Rondel form.  A French form consisting of 13 lines:  two quatrains and a quintet, rhyming as follows:  ABba abAB abbaA.  The capital letters are the refrains, or repeats.
 
There never seem to be enough time to spend with the ones we love.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeHenry M. on July 13, 2008 08:33:08 PM Report
Very nicely done Patty, I love the style you used.  Henry
Comment By: FreeGlata on May 29, 2008 12:24:37 PM Report

Ahh Patty...beautifully done! You  and your son are both so talented with working these various styles.


Hugs...Glata


Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on May 20, 2008 03:50:48 PM Report
You do such a good job of fitting lovely poems inside the structures of these various poetry styles, Pen...Very nice stuff, kid...len
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on May 19, 2008 07:55:51 AM Report
Expertly done and a real pleasure to read, I so enjoy reading this form of poetry.




 


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