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Author Name: Premiumwordsworthswords 11 Comments
Date Added: May 30, 2008 22:05:01 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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She asked me if I wanted her and I said no
I told her that my heart needed her so

She asked me if I thought she was pretty and I said of course not
I told her that she was the most beautiful woman this world has got

She asked me through thick and thin would I stay by her side
I said no, I told her that I would hold her through the toughest ride

She asked me if I could be patient and take things in stride
I said no, I told her I would be here until the day I died

She asked me if she were to ever leave would I cry
I said no, I told her if she were to leave I would die
Author's Notes:

Based on an email I got today

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Comment By: Freemaggie lopez sherry wilbur on July 24, 2009 05:04:32 PM Report
Where were you when I was looking for a husband? Absolutely awe - inspiring! Beautiful!
Comment By: FreeJennifer on October 4, 2008 09:23:14 PM Report
Comment By: FreeRodra on June 19, 2008 10:12:45 AM Report
Terrific write... So romantic...

Well done, Joe!



Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on June 12, 2008 07:07:31 PM Report
Only a romantic sap can see the beauty in these words Joe


~ A Romantic Sap = Cindy


Comment By: FreeCathy on June 10, 2008 04:19:30 PM Report
So touching and beautiful love the last stanza also perfect poem

Comment By: FreeBrittany on June 8, 2008 10:23:09 PM Report

Aww...very beautiful! And sweet as well! :) Great write!

Comment By: FreeS on June 5, 2008 02:25:39 PM Report
the last couplet is the best one

great poem man

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on May 31, 2008 01:14:37 PM Report
You hound, you. :o)...len
Comment By: FreeHenry M. on May 31, 2008 08:15:55 AM Report
I got that e-mail from you Joe and it, like this is loaded with truth! Nice take on this one Joe.  Henry
Comment By: Premiumjohn j. carey on May 31, 2008 07:14:40 AM Report
joe, this was beyond incredible........ what ever inspired this it bought out the best in you. raw,unashamed emotional writing here. great job,john
Comment By: FreeGlata on May 31, 2008 05:47:13 AM Report
I've seen this  email....and it reminds  me, every time I get it,  to tell the one that I love just how much he means to me.

Thank you for this reminder :o)

Hugs...and now off to work...yuk!



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