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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 8 Comments
Date Added: May 31, 2008 12:05:36 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Shadows
A reluctant setting sun finally yields its control
 
Quickly retreating in to the stark blue evening
 
Shadows awakened now move about silently
 
Ethereal spirits that live between light and dark
 
Serenity transforms into an indefinable emotion
 
Whispers precede feelings of an unseen presence
 
Uncontrollably drifting through time and substance
 
Instinct at once pushes away conscious thoughts
 

Primitive responses hidden by evolution resurface

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Comment By: FreeGlata on June 12, 2008 02:51:11 PM Report
Just loverly, Steve...as always!  You have a beautiful  way with words and a way of making things seem very real...

Hugs to ya!

Glata

Comment By: FreeAngel on June 5, 2008 02:33:23 PM Report
Wonderful Steve. My comp has been having probs sorry not been on

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeAdri on June 2, 2008 12:51:04 AM Report
This is good, good lines with solid emotion of observation. 
Very very good, I like this a lot. 
This is such a strong poem!

Adri x

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on June 1, 2008 09:50:55 PM Report
You have just stepped into.....\"The Steve Zone.\"   I really like this, brother.. The time between night and day...wakefulness and slumber, can harbor many unseen things... Love IT!...len
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on June 1, 2008 05:51:43 PM Report
"Ethereal spirits that live between light and dark"...loved this line, it is a knowing that something else is there in that brief window yet it cannot be defined. This line made me think about my situation...of how I feel caught in that space of neither here nor there. Fine penning Steve!

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on May 31, 2008 05:50:49 PM Report
Transitions in life I think is constant ...sometimes the whispers is what you need to be listening to in life.. Your such a wonderful poet with ways to express what you feel.. A true gift of speaking words...
 ~ Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on May 31, 2008 05:35:18 PM Report
Steve,
This is a great write and belive you've described transition very well.
I know I have experienced, many have a hard time getting a grasp on it.
Well done!
~Tracie

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on May 31, 2008 01:23:48 PM Report
yes, lol

 

Times of transition are always loaded with potential.

 

Ali x





 


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