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Author Name: Freequeens1 2 Comments
Date Added: June 15, 2008 20:06:43 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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A Moment Relived
Again and again and again,
I reach out for you in the night.
It canít be considered a sin
If we both feel that it is right.
 
I reach out for you in the night
Where I encounter a cold place.
If we both feel that it is right,
We can overcome time and space.
 
Where I encounter a cold place,
You were there only recently.
We can overcome time and space
If you desire to be with me.
 
You were there only recently,
I turned my head and you were gone.
If you desire to be with me,
Once done cannot be undone.
 
I turned my head and you were gone,
A kiss of mutual consent,
Once done cannot be undone,
I simply relive that moment.
 
A kiss of mutual consent
Cannot be considered a sin.
I simply relive that moment
Again and again and again.
 
 
 
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Author's Notes:
I'm trying out a new form called Pantoum (www.shadowpoetry.com).  It's not quite right, but I will edit it until I get it right.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on June 16, 2008 04:01:32 PM Report
When love is sin, it's time to be a sinner, I say...:o)...len
Comment By: FreeCathy on June 16, 2008 07:15:38 AM Report
Excellent poem I really enjoyed reading this new form I don't really know what Pantoum is but enjoyed this poem alot..
............Cathy..............





 


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