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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 19 Comments
Date Added: June 17, 2008 09:06:34 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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So Deep Within
Fill the void
Make me whole again


Cleanse this soul
Of all my sin


Offer your touch
Pull me close in


Kiss away my tears
Before they begin


Make me a part of you

So deep within

Most of all
Whatever you do
Hold my love

Secure to you

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Comment By: FreeEllis Beck on April 7, 2009 01:27:14 PM Report
Really sweet and touching poem....but powerful as well.


I really enjoyed it :)





Comment By: FreeDeAnna on July 23, 2008 06:48:02 PM Report
Cograts My Friend! You are the Bomb! Your words are like treasured jewels......Great Write...,Hugs DeAnna
Comment By: FreeAmy on July 15, 2008 07:34:35 AM Report
This is my favorite type of love poem to that is made of simple statements made straight from the heart. It allows the reader to feel it along with you without be junked up with flowery words.

Congrats on another poem so worthy of its Feature.


Comment By: FreeAdri on July 15, 2008 01:52:36 AM Report
Great!  I am glad it won. 
Congratulations on the award! 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on July 14, 2008 11:00:55 AM Report
Steve:  super congratulations on your Feature Poem Award.


Lady D


Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on July 14, 2008 03:30:29 AM Report
Very touching Steve. Congrats on the award, Joe
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on July 13, 2008 09:59:53 PM Report

Congrats!!! Glad to see you win

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on July 13, 2008 09:59:45 PM Report


Comment By: FreeCathy on July 13, 2008 07:27:11 PM Report
hey congratulations on this well deserved award Great job

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on June 18, 2008 04:53:22 PM Report
There are so many who never find this sort of relationship, Steve.. I think we are both very fortunate fellows.. Very nice, buddy...len
Comment By: Freeb doneff on June 17, 2008 10:50:13 PM Report
How very lovely. Filled with a kind spirit, and gentle plea from the heart.

Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on June 17, 2008 10:21:46 PM Report
Warm, loving and a vulnerability that keeps two hearts close to each other. Nicely penned Steve.

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 17, 2008 09:48:14 PM Report
 With this kind of emotion from you who could say no!!
 YOur heart is gentle and filled with love...
 Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeJoe on June 17, 2008 06:01:56 PM Report
Nicely penned Steve. Full of emotion. Joe
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on June 17, 2008 03:11:53 PM Report
Very sweet Steve...soft and gentle and full of vulnerbility. One of my faves of yours.

~Cindy xo

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on June 17, 2008 02:44:12 PM Report
Fantastic write! Thanks for the smile, needed one today..
Blessings to you also..
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on June 17, 2008 10:51:25 AM Report
The title drew me in and it was the line that jumped out at me. Nothing superficial is fulfilling...only when the emotions run deep is a union ever worthwhile. This poem is going to have all the ladies lined up to take you up on the offer. So brief, so very lovely. =))



Comment By: FreeCathy on June 17, 2008 10:01:39 AM Report
I agree with Adri so very amazing and the last stanza well just says it all so very beautifully written to touch the heart loved it.

Comment By: FreeAdri on June 17, 2008 09:52:14 AM Report
Oh this is gorgeous.  I clear declaration of having love for someone. 
The last stanza is so amazing!!! 
Love it such a beautiful thing.
Adri x


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