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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 4 Comments
Date Added: June 25, 2008 08:06:11 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Great Darkness
And there came a great darkness shroud
over now the wilderness of her mind

A fatal shock that turned her emotions
and her loving heart to bitter stone


REBELLION TEARS REARS UP WITH BOLDNESS
 THRUSTING  HER FIGHTING VOICE
TO FINALLY CURSE


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Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on June 26, 2008 02:20:07 AM Report
very powerful India. I can actually feel the emotion in Scotland!

A very stirring poem full of warning.

yes, we gain nothing by being subserviant all the time. There are occaisions we need to rise up!

 

Ali x

Comment By: Freecolin skilton on June 25, 2008 03:36:46 PM Report
Wow India

this is so deep and full of anger and hate that betrayal brings.

The emotion seeps through in a tale that some of us undertsand as we have tasted

this dark shroud too.

I enjoyed this poem and will read it again and again.

Colinxxx

Comment By: Freetraci on June 25, 2008 01:32:57 PM Report
So much hurt here...good one my dear..

 

               Hugs.. Traci

Comment By: FreeCathy on June 25, 2008 08:26:35 AM Report
Another beautiful write here yes you are indeed the master you always touch my heart with your masterpieces as you did with this. Loved it
.......Cathy





 


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