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Author Name: FreeBlueyd553 21 Comments
Date Added: June 26, 2008 00:06:55 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Clearly
 
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his words
so softly placed
grace each page
a master artisan
each richly woven
verse creates
perfect patterns
of tapestry
yet, the finest
of all his
gifts
lies not in each
poetic stitch
but in
the
transparency
of his
soul
 
 
 
 
 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAlfred Berggren on September 7, 2010 01:00:52 PM Report
Yes it true. We do see beyond the words of the poem. We see the soul of the author, his/her very being. The words seem only the doorway into that soul. Your poem is so outstanding in that you've captured that truth so well.
Comment By: FreeAndrew on March 18, 2010 12:29:48 PM Report

the person to whom this loving tribute was directed should have a heart bursting with pride.  this is a tremendous salute from a writer without peer.  i think we'd all love to see more - i know i would....


Comment By: FreeAlfred on December 7, 2009 11:09:13 AM Report
Nice words for any poet to read. Your own poem is a lovely tapestry of design.
Comment By: FreeHannah Mae on September 23, 2008 01:45:25 AM Report
Wow!! Short and incredibly beautiful and profound. An excellent write. I love this!

 

~Shanna

Comment By: FreeMike on July 20, 2008 10:39:21 AM Report
Wow, Bravo! This is amazing.
Comment By: FreeTessa on July 15, 2008 10:52:16 PM Report
Beautiful

LOL

Tessa

Comment By: Freejag on July 7, 2008 04:28:42 PM Report
Beautifully written I love the brevity of the words how they just say enough and no more.

Comment By: Freecolin skilton on July 1, 2008 03:56:53 PM Report
Hello Cindy Darling

What a rich tapestry you weave here, full of golden and red and blue silk threads that weave into this beautiful piece.

Another gem from a Gem of a Lady.

Colinxxx

Comment By: PremiumDavid Turner on June 30, 2008 02:50:28 AM Report
Well - This must be about Mr Shakespeare Cindy?

A man for all times and all men and all women too!

 


 

A technical comment:-



"patterns of pure

tapestry"

 

This metaphor seems a little over egged - what, for example, is an impure tapestry? It is the word  'pure' . All tapestries made of weft and wool must perforce be pure tapestry. I assume hat what you mean is that his words create wonderful, intricate pictures with the richness and brightness of tapestry. Could you say 'bright tapestry'  or 'intricate tapestry' I cannot think of another single syllable word to replace 'pure'  (fine?) but would a 2 syllable word be OK? If so  then there lots.

 

Warm Wiswhes

 

David

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on June 29, 2008 04:47:17 PM Report
You weave a pretty mean tapestry yourself, Cindy..This is lovely...len
Comment By: FreeS on June 29, 2008 12:22:01 PM Report
wait .. this is about me right ?

haha just kidding

great poem cindy
simple and sharp

Comment By: Freejohn carter on June 29, 2008 10:46:29 AM Report
Superb Cindy. I have read nothing finer.

                                                 John

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on June 29, 2008 12:50:07 AM Report
If I could put into words what I felt while reading this, that indeed would be poetry itself, but in truth Cindy you have excelled yourself, so there are not enough words to do you justice, suffice to say if the hand could hold the heart, then the eyes would see the soul~Graham.
Comment By: FreeAmy on June 26, 2008 08:06:48 PM Report
I wish I could mark this as my Favorite Favorite.

I have alot of favorites but this is my favorite at this site, so far.

I don't see your name here so I hope you are somewhere writing right now...hoping you're on a roll.

~Amy

Comment By: Premiumlionheart on June 26, 2008 04:39:46 PM Report
This is one of your best m'lady.

A wonderful piece of writing.

I mean this sincerely.

 

Richard xo

Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on June 26, 2008 03:07:43 PM Report
Wow Cindy! This is some powerful stuff here! "Yet the finest of all his gifts lies not in each poetic stitch, but in the transparency of his soul". Just beautiful Cindy, a masterful work of poetry!  Henry
Comment By: FreeSteve on June 26, 2008 12:41:26 PM Report
This is simply romance distilled down to the basic elements.  An excellent poem.
Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on June 26, 2008 11:04:26 AM Report
Can you say a poet is transparent?  Just kidding, I realize the core of this is a poet you have read and left an impact on you but I can't help but notice how sincere the narrator is and how that voice picks up on the finer points of reading poetry and how it is supposed to pluck an emotional chord and let the reader in.  I always think it a blessing if a poet can have that just once in a lifetime. 
Comment By: FreeCathy on June 26, 2008 10:09:59 AM Report
The picture so perfect to the poem loved this. So beautifully written
........Cathy

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 26, 2008 07:25:41 AM Report
Cindy,
 Goodness what passion you have for him.... beautiful emotions of the heart and the picture is perfect .. I love this so astonishing to read first thing this morning...
Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on June 26, 2008 02:15:18 AM Report
OMG!!! You have excelled yourself here Cindy!

Into favs for me for sure.

 

Ali x





 


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