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Author Name: Premiumlionheart 12 Comments
Date Added: June 26, 2008 07:06:47 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Soliloquy On A Summer's Eve
 When the last of sun's light   
 Filters through the forest,   
 Wistful thoughts flood my mind.      
 The murmerings of night will soon begin.    
  But I wish the sunlight to stay a little longer.   
  Winecups and primroses lean to get their final share   
  As do I...   
  There seems more reason for holding on to days now;   
  Time is not kind anymore.    
  I leave the dusk to envelop it all.    
  What choice...?    
  Let the night have its way    
  With peeps of tree frogs,    
  The plaintive whipporwill;      
  And cricket songs,     
  Not so bad...     
  Most of us will have another day.
       
 
 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on August 30, 2008 06:03:32 PM Report
OHHHH RICHARD!!!! ..................:o(
Comment By: FreeGlata on July 7, 2008 06:10:16 AM Report
I love the mastery you have with words! You paint a magnificent scene, even without a paint brush!

Big hugs....

Sunshine

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on July 2, 2008 01:42:02 PM Report

You paint the perfect picture with your words Richard. Nicely done, Joe


Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on June 29, 2008 05:13:51 PM Report
That's life, huh? As the sands of the hourglass, so go the days of our lives...len
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on June 28, 2008 01:57:49 PM Report
Ah, the melancholy settles over me like a fog. You do this very well. ML
Comment By: FreeReborn on June 27, 2008 06:55:09 PM Report
aaaaaaaaaaaaah, nature and the returning miracle of night and day ever coming and going. Very satisfying and filling to the soul, Lionheart!!

 

*~Reborn~*

Comment By: FreeTia Bayer on June 26, 2008 11:29:16 PM Report
I love the ending "Most uf us will have another day."

Lets you know how uncertain life truly is.

Nice.

<3 Tia

Comment By: FreeAmy on June 26, 2008 08:23:00 PM Report
I don't know if I'm reading something into this or not... I see the beauty of the woods and nature in your words but I felt a twinge of sadness too ...A 'days are numbered' type of sadness...every sundown is one less sundown.

Even if I am wrong...I enjoyed the read.

It's a lovely penning

~Amy

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on June 26, 2008 01:15:11 PM Report
Excellent writing Richard. I love this...it was a real delight to find and enjoy. Your talent is outstanding! =))

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeSteve on June 26, 2008 12:43:07 PM Report
You are very good at painting vivid pictures with your words.
Comment By: FreeCathy on June 26, 2008 09:01:57 AM Report
I just love the imagery in this picture so perfect you have painted. Your words just captured me into the poem and kept me till the end.. Just loved every word of this masterpiece.
.........Cathy

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 26, 2008 07:27:29 AM Report
You paint so beautiful with words... the vision was astonishing... another day  dawns..
Hugs ~ She Whispers





 


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