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Author Name: FreeBlueyd553 40 Comments
Date Added: July 03, 2008 00:07:47 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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First Star to the Right
 
~*~ First Star to the Right ~*~
 
 
blustar-1.jpg picture by blueyedsoul_cindy
 
 
He finds his destiny in blue sky sights
Sitting in a porch swing, on painted desert nights
The sweet smell of wildflower, the memory of her smile
Finds a lonely cowboy waiting all the while
 
He dreams of a woman, close by his side
Like the presence of an angel, all doubts defied;
Warming him gently, caressing him with care;
Someone to hold onto, a life they might share;
 
Healing for his heartaches; the comfort of a home
A sweet soulful yearning, like nothing he's ever known
Through oceans of night sky, he searches starlight fields
Wondering what promise his heart cry might yield

He feels her close by him, her spirit never far
Then searches the dark sky for her bright burning star
He gave her directions, first star to the right
Never forgotten, he holds fast to her light
 
~*~
 
 
 
 
Author's Notes:
Acknowledgement to Photobucket Video and Imaging Hosting
 
This poem was written for someone I know. The deeper meaning is known only to him.
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumRoyce Emley on March 28, 2018 04:04:46 PM Report


I don't make many comments but after noticing you making such nice comments on my poetry I was compelled to look. This is a great one .Love your style of rhyme

I can see why you received the award. Simply GREAT poem.

Comment By: FreeMaples on November 9, 2010 06:23:44 PM Report
This poem could very well be the most beautiful poem I have EVER read. You have just taken the cake. Deff going in my favorites.

 

Meg

Comment By: FreeMujtaba H Zaidi on September 12, 2010 12:11:31 AM Report
Dear Cindy! It is really a moving piece of literature that touches the heart and captures the feelings! Congratulations on winning award!
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on September 7, 2010 07:22:32 PM Report
Incredible, Cindy...it is so soft and dreamy!  I loved the title and very happy to see how you carried it out in the last stanza.  Wonderful way you wrote this from the cowboy's perspective... a poem that leaves the reader with hope that his search will end when he finds her...first star to the right.  another fave!
Comment By: FreeMichelle on July 5, 2010 03:31:25 PM Report
Beautiful and moving, very well done :) Belated congratulations on the featured award, for this is most deserved.

 

Shell

Comment By: FreeThomas Heath on January 18, 2010 03:19:34 PM Report
Definatley worthy of a prize. Well done this is exceptional!
Comment By: PremiumBruce A. Peaslee on November 23, 2008 02:58:14 PM Report
Cindy - What caught my attention is the "Peter Pan" reference, but I really enjoy where this work went from there. Beautifully done.

 

---Poetrydad---

Comment By: FreeJennifer on October 4, 2008 08:54:57 PM Report
this is beautiful CONGRATS GIRLEE

Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on October 3, 2008 01:59:32 AM Report
I want to weep for him. For us. All of us who've lost. For myself. This is marvelous work, Cindy. Just marvelous. So glad it won the award. ML
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on September 26, 2008 05:51:26 PM Report
Just enchanting Cindy dear!

Beautifully woven...an award well deserved!

Hugs,
Pamela

Comment By: FreeFilthy on September 4, 2008 08:16:22 AM Report
TOP JOB Cin! One hell of a poem and deserving of that gong up there.
Comment By: FreeS on September 3, 2008 07:26:00 PM Report
great job cindy
congrats

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on August 25, 2008 05:25:04 PM Report
This is well-deseving of the award, Cindy..Just splendid writing...len
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on August 15, 2008 04:19:30 PM Report
If any poem ever deserved the featured award this one does.
It is crafted beautifully and you should be very proud of it.
Linda

Comment By: FreeCathy on August 13, 2008 07:13:39 PM Report
What a  beautiful poem just loved it you really deserve this award,  Congratulations

............Cathy

Comment By: FreeMark S. Valence on August 12, 2008 02:00:00 PM Report
Damn....this write makes me want to move back to texas and become a cowboy. Good writing ms Bendel.......Damn Good!
Comment By: Freenoah count on August 12, 2008 10:52:01 AM Report
"Wondering what promise his heart cry might yield".  That is the most perfect description of looking at the night sky I've ever read.  Meters of beauty.  It wouldn't be Capella, would it?    
Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on August 12, 2008 03:04:08 AM Report
Cindy,
Man o man this is stunning! Excellent write--
Congratulations!
~Tracie

Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on August 11, 2008 10:58:13 PM Report
I knew when I first read this that there would be more than just me who found this poem to be so beautiful! It turns out that I was right, congratulations Cindy, this is so deserving of a featured award! Bravo!!   Henry
Comment By: Freejess on August 11, 2008 01:11:06 PM Report
Cathy,

This poem is absolutely beatiful!

CONGRATS on winning the feature award....

Comment By: FreeGee on August 11, 2008 09:22:33 AM Report
Cindy,
Congratulations on the award.
This is such a Brilliant write from you.
Wonderful...

Many Hugs,
Gee xxxxx

Comment By: FreeAdri on August 11, 2008 05:16:02 AM Report
Congrats, it is really a stunning piece of poetry.

Adri x

Comment By: FreeAmy on August 10, 2008 10:22:00 PM Report
Cindy,

So glad to see this one get a Feature....I loved it the first time I read it and I still love it.

Congrats to you!

~Amy

Comment By: FreeSteve on August 10, 2008 08:20:39 PM Report
Congratulations on the award Cindy !
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on August 10, 2008 07:33:22 PM Report
Cindy:  what a beautiful write and very deserving of a Feature Poem Award.

 

Lady Dragonwyck

Comment By: Freejess on July 31, 2008 01:31:18 PM Report
Cindy,

This is a beautiful poem...I enjoyed reading every line....

Comment By: FreeSteve on July 20, 2008 10:17:36 AM Report
Romance and love shine bright in this beautiful poem Cindy.
Comment By: FreeTessa on July 15, 2008 10:56:18 PM Report
Romantic, people think this way but seldom write this way.Great write!

 Tessa  

Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on July 9, 2008 02:36:24 PM Report
I've always heard look to the sky for directions.  Lately though, I look up at the big dipper and wonder if it's half full or half empty.  Things go that way somethimes.  I like the feeling of this poem.  The simple direction that will last a life time.  Wonderful work!
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on July 9, 2008 12:27:22 PM Report
lovely flowing poem beautifully illustrated by the choice of backing

 

Ali x

Comment By: Freejag on July 7, 2008 04:30:58 PM Report
A faultless rhyme that flows effortlessly. I read a lot of rhyming poetry on this site and very few get the measure and the rhythm so exactly right as you have done here.

Comment By: Premiumlionheart on July 4, 2008 05:07:53 PM Report
Oh my...deep into space and your heart you fling us.

I love this one Cindy.

Sincerely,

 

Richard xo

Comment By: Freecolin skilton on July 4, 2008 04:06:32 PM Report
Ah Cindy My Pretty Lady,

what a love poem for someone special to you.

The depth of feeling and visual writing allows us to see them both

and the love they share together.

A beutiful moving piece from a beautiful Princess.

Colinxxx  

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on July 3, 2008 07:37:39 PM Report
Delightful penning Cindy...this reached inside and gave my heart a tight squeeze. These are beautiful love filled verses coupled with the yearning that separation brings. *sigh*

 

~Barbara~ 

Comment By: PremiumDavid Turner on July 3, 2008 06:20:04 PM Report
THe changes you have made to this are spot on Barbara. There is a very bright star in the south at the moment at about 1am, (It will be the same local time for you as for me) but I am unable to find out what it is. It must be a planet I think - probably Jupiter. I willget my telescope out tonight to check if it is clear.

 

WArm Wishes

 

David

Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on July 3, 2008 02:19:46 PM Report
Cindy, this is so beautiful! A tale that can only be told and understood by those with yearning hearts. I can bet that your deeper meaning will get through to him.  Henry
Comment By: FreeCathy on July 3, 2008 10:39:25 AM Report
WOW this is breathtaking, Just warms my heart.  I loved it Your words reaching out to touch the heart your imagery so perfect to bring your reader into the poem not wanting to leave. So beautiful in every whispered word I am putting it into my favorites
........Cathy

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 3, 2008 07:42:59 AM Report
Cindy,
 As always we love your poems with pictures and music  such beautiful words that capture us all will such wonder.. you are indeed a lovely blessing on our site!!
 PLus ...thank you for your wonderful comments on my poems.. I appreciate them so much.. Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: PremiumDavid Turner on July 3, 2008 05:28:05 AM Report
A very Poignant poem Cindy - where did you get the idea? It has echos of Peter Pan.

I think it is about a cowboy's wife/woman who died, but I don't understand the last line -

 

She's never forgotten, a full moon so bright

 

Is she a star or the moon?

 

David

Comment By: FreeAmy on July 3, 2008 01:06:47 AM Report
I'm sure he loves it...It's beautiful both in words and presentation.

The reader always gets an extra treat with your writes.

~Amy





 


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