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Author Name: Freerainbowchaser 5 Comments
Date Added: July 09, 2008 05:07:04 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Oh, What a Ride
Ride the coaster
Rising high
Plummeting low
And then I cry
Rise high again
Then lower still
Eggs a no-show
For me no thrill
The tubes are blocked
Get me off this ride
Belly is swollen
No babe inside
Needles and drugs
And tests galore
Ten years of this
I want no more!
Author's Notes:

infertility

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Comment By: FreeSteve on July 9, 2008 09:06:21 AM Report

Amy, this is truly one of the most emotionally honest and sincere poems I have ever read.  May the light divine providence shine on you.   


 


This is a great metaphor for the emotions expressed. 


Ride the coaster

Rising high

Plummeting low

Comment By: FreeCathy on July 9, 2008 07:14:55 AM Report
Yes your pain and dissapointment show in your words how heart wrenching this must be I am so sorry for you and yes indeed you are a Strong and Brave woman. This poem so very well expressed all this excellent and sad
.......hugs Cathy

Comment By: FreeHelen on July 9, 2008 05:56:41 AM Report
oh.....
Comment By: Premiumjohn j. carey on July 9, 2008 05:51:46 AM Report
Amy, i can hear the pain  and disapointment  between the words and the lines. I agree with Lionheart. your a brave woman for posting this. john
Comment By: Premiumlionheart on July 9, 2008 05:13:52 AM Report
You are a brave woman for posting this. It is so damn sad.

Life is just not fair sometimes. 

Hug ++,

Richard





 


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