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Author Name: Freeavanheerden 17 Comments
Date Added: July 10, 2008 09:07:22 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Scattered in the wind around us
days pass by
orchestrating our being, changing our minds.
Age add wisdom, but the soul be forever young

as we chase our dreams around, despite our knowledge,
wile still having fears in our hearts.
You brought a change into the cycle;
as a breath of fresh air, you
broke the monotone existence,
change it all around.
Richer we are, because we know
the you inside
the you, you show.
May we stay forever breathless
As you stay forever real.

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Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on April 7, 2010 11:31:57 PM Report
Great work Adri.  I love this one my friend.  Damon
Comment By: FreeJennifer on October 21, 2008 08:30:27 AM Report
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on October 6, 2008 04:24:53 PM Report
A stunning dedication for a wonderful poet Adri.

Lovely use of the english language!


Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on August 8, 2008 05:24:47 PM Report
What a great birthday wish, Adri...Great to dee ya posting again...len
Comment By: Freeabby on August 5, 2008 06:21:36 AM Report
A beautiful piece. You are right -

whatever the circle of days

and the change of minds and knowledge;

the soul is forever young.  


Comment By: FreeS on July 23, 2008 01:49:52 PM Report
sweet poem

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on July 21, 2008 03:57:03 AM Report
Terrific write and dedication Adri. Joe
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on July 20, 2008 06:23:38 AM Report
Another example of your superior writing skills Adri.
Lovely ,lovely poem.


Ali x

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on July 18, 2008 04:38:49 AM Report
For James it may be, simple it is not, it is as beautiful a piece of writing I have read in a long time, he is fortunate indeed Adri.
Comment By: FreeFilthy on July 14, 2008 04:04:51 PM Report
A great birthday poem.
Comment By: FreeGlata on July 11, 2008 06:40:48 PM Report
A happy belated birthday to James!

Beautiful, dear always. You have created a masterpiece here and I'm very impressed!

Lovely work!



Comment By: Freejohn carter on July 11, 2008 01:24:26 AM Report
This is a wonderful write and one i am sure James will love also. The last two lines are superb as is all this write.


Comment By: FreeSteve on July 10, 2008 11:56:32 AM Report
A wonferful dedication to the bond of friendship. A person that can call you friend is fortunate. 
Comment By: Freeb doneff on July 10, 2008 11:31:53 AM Report
Simple and sweet; could it get any better? I think not! Good on you Adri, and birthday wishes to James.

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on July 10, 2008 10:00:22 AM Report
Awwwww, he sounds like a wonderful person. Sweet dedication Adri, one that anybody would appreciate. =)) Lovely!



Comment By: FreeAmy on July 10, 2008 09:10:30 AM Report
breathtaking poetry here....a beautiful message and wonderful dedication.

I love this.


Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on July 10, 2008 09:09:08 AM Report
Adri:  beautiful poem.  This write really brought out the title -- this is excellent.  Your style is incredible.  


Lady D


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