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Author Name: Freejohncarter 6 Comments
Date Added: July 15, 2008 13:07:38 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Sunrise

Sunrise

I surrender to your arms
In a night of one sunrise
And then you will know me
The darkness never hurts me
But when I reach for you
The sun can be kissed away
In a lonely hideaway
Full of one sunrise
Or wait for evermore for you.
Author's Notes:
I was cooking some fish
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeSteve on July 15, 2008 09:52:11 PM Report
Romance is woven through this poem.  Your story sounds fishy.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 15, 2008 08:04:46 PM Report
Fish... At a time like this...did you burn them??
 You wrote a love poem cooking fish... May I ask what table wine were you sipping...??? ((Smiless
 Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeAngel on July 15, 2008 04:12:09 PM Report
Fish love it my fav dish. Just what I am havig tomorrow for my lunch. Am assortment with lots of dips yummy. Sounds wonderful. The write was fantastic to. Gis a taste
Comment By: FreeCathy on July 15, 2008 03:22:16 PM Report
I just loved this keep cooking that fish while you write you have whisped me away once again
......hugs Cathy

Comment By: Freeb doneff on July 15, 2008 02:18:06 PM Report
What were you doing? Writing a line each time you flipped it? Too much garlic and lemon? Whatever it was, can I have some please? lol Missed breakfast and lunch! lol
I am no good at critiquing something, so I will simply say this was eloquent and inviting.
b

Comment By: FreeAdri on July 15, 2008 02:01:49 PM Report
Beautiful.  Every word masterfully crafted for saying so much.  A real true account. 
Really a special write.
Adri x





 


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