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Author Name: FreeSensual Sorceress 19 Comments
Date Added: July 15, 2008 14:07:39 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Signal Fires
Winds of misfortune scattered jagged
fragments of my heart along a deserted highway.
I became a castaway on a roadside of spacious ache
to be filled with the desperation of unknown coordinates.
I built sandcastles in the path of incoming desert breezes,
and furnished them with half-starved expectations.
When my eyes filled with tears as each castle flew past,
I blamed the smoke from the green wood of native signal fires.


Author's Notes:
Just trying to get back into the habit of writing again.
Thanks to David Turner and Ross McCague for edit suggestions.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeFilthy on August 3, 2008 04:14:29 PM Report
Love this J! Congrats on the award.
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on July 23, 2008 08:14:43 PM Report
Beautiful work Jolen..........as usual! Congrats! Joe
Comment By: FreeAdri on July 22, 2008 02:47:59 PM Report

Congratulations on the win my J!
Adri x


Comment By: FreeSteve on July 22, 2008 01:14:28 PM Report
Another excellent poem placed on a long list of  compelling reads.  Congratulations.
Comment By: FreeCathy on July 22, 2008 11:33:48 AM Report
Woooo hooooooo I am standing and applauding you really did deserve this award I love it even more the second time I read it Way to go!!!!!!!
.......love and hugs Cathy

Comment By: FreeAmy on July 22, 2008 08:14:27 AM Report
Congrats, Jolen on the award. This piece was soooo worthy. Loved it.

~Amy

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on July 20, 2008 03:17:50 PM Report
Good to see ya posting again, my Aces... Strong stuff, kid..

 

"Winds of misfortune scattered jagged
fragments of my heart along a deserted highway."

 


 

Man....What an image!!!....yereverlovinfurball



Comment By: Freejohn carter on July 16, 2008 04:59:45 PM Report
My first comment was wrong. This flows with life need and want and lives in it's dream of love.

                                                                  John

Comment By: Freejohn carter on July 16, 2008 04:17:12 PM Report
This is brilliant like random thoughts in an organised way.

                                                         John

Comment By: PremiumMelanie on July 16, 2008 07:07:50 AM Report
Your writing is just as beautiful as ever.

Happy and privileged to be reading it again.

Comment By: FreeHenry M. on July 15, 2008 09:26:52 PM Report
Well Jody, you just proved the old adage that once you learn how to ride a bike, you never forget it! These words prove that you haven't forgotten and you're right back in the habit of writing! Great work.  Henry
Comment By: Freeb doneff on July 15, 2008 09:12:52 PM Report
TRYING to get back into writing again? What in the hell do you mean? I think you HAVE!! Holy smokes here Ms. Gorgeous, you took my breath away and gave it back, all in one fell swoop.
"The best poets never have writer's block, they are just building up steam for the next go round."
(my quote, and what I tell myself, lol)
Loving you, and this, from here.
bb

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 15, 2008 07:59:55 PM Report
Jolen,
 As always you leave us apart of your emotions and wisdome about life... We miss you Girl!
Know one writes like you!!
Glad your happy with the love of your life..
Hugs and Love ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeAmy on July 15, 2008 07:49:43 PM Report
Glad to see ya posting too. I love this dreamy gem. I especially like

'I built sandcastles in the path of incoming moon tides, and furnished them with half-starved dreams.'   

That's a great line.

~Amy  


 

Comment By: Freetom on July 15, 2008 04:06:58 PM Report

this is a beautiful penning Jolen of space and sandcastles and dreams that never come true. you have get writers block or lose your muse but you have a great way with words and it looks like your back into the swing just keep up the beautiful pennings


hugs kisses


tom


Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on July 15, 2008 04:01:53 PM Report
Well! Right! That's what I do. Glad to see you back at work. ML
Comment By: FreeCathy on July 15, 2008 03:19:49 PM Report
ohhhhhh how I missed your writing I loved it just breathtaking in every word touching my heart as I read Perfect just perfect
........Cathy

Comment By: FreePelagic Mind on July 15, 2008 02:59:01 PM Report
I think its difficult to write unless you have an ispiration to do so. Otherwise it becomes just a sketch pad of ideas that can be useful in future, you only have to look at my work to see that principle demonstarted clearly because most if not all my work always need "more" doing to it. a bit like weeding really...

 

But this piece is inspirational so you need not worry, the images work well and it has an easy style..

Comment By: FreeAdri on July 15, 2008 02:54:25 PM Report
Oh how very beautiful.  I am glad to see you posting again and such a beautiful piece.
Stunning picture you paint here my J, as always. 
Love your work.
Adri x





 


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