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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 3 Comments
Date Added: July 16, 2008 20:07:21 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Inadequacys
Through the endless hours of afflictions they both
 hear a new tenderness in their poetic voices

Not until they were able to get the eyes
of discernment opened did they know

They had became so blind to the world of others
they were unable to see each other

Stubborn pride and tears had kept them apart
shattering them both right from the start

Spiritual eyes were finally opened
they both saw the invisible

 Suffering has the power to
teach them
their own inadequacys

~*~
They still loved each other
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngel on July 19, 2008 11:51:35 AM Report
It takes many things to make us realise just what we have in front of us. Like the saying you never know what you have till its gone hun...

 

Beautiful

Comment By: FreeCathy on July 17, 2008 09:28:08 AM Report
Loved it very mush you words once again whisped me away as my heart was warmed by your words Excellent once again

love and hugs Cathy

Comment By: PremiumVizualEnsemble on July 16, 2008 09:04:05 PM Report
yet another beautiful write. Love never truly dies...we bury it at times to help

heal, to move on. but when a love is rekindled, the fire burns deeper. It awaken the heart to

forgive, to love deeper, to cling and to never let go. This is beautiful my friend.

Hugs,

Penny





 


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