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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 12 Comments
Date Added: July 23, 2008 14:07:21 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Unbroken

The weight of time won’t steal my memories

 

Each falling tear reflects visions of our love

 

I trace silent steps with thoughts of only you

 

Loneliness moves with me like my shadow

 

Days slow the moment of your return to me
 
Our love is a chain that will never be  broken

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Notes:
A woman waiting for the return of the man she loves from a military deployment.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on May 11, 2009 03:47:49 PM Report

The waiting must be torture knowing there is risk involved. Your poem indicates you understand how a woman in the situation feels. Tender write Steve.


~Barbara~  


Comment By: FreeMary F. Charest on September 15, 2008 08:50:46 PM Report
Very touching and beautifully written.

Mary

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on July 24, 2008 04:30:18 PM Report
Absence makes the heart grow fonder...Sometimes, it makes the heart grow fonder for someone else, but that's another story.  :o)..Nicely worded, Shady Steve...len
Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on July 24, 2008 11:29:01 AM Report
Touching deep write..Each stanza tugs at the heart. Well written Steve.

Helen

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 23, 2008 09:10:32 PM Report

I feel this poem more than you know!! Hugs ~ She




I trace silent steps with thoughts of only you


 


Loneliness moves with me like my shadow
Comment By: Premiumjohn j. carey on July 23, 2008 08:19:04 PM Report
Steve, Well done my friend, john
Comment By: FreeGee on July 23, 2008 07:07:23 PM Report
Steve.....

 

This is Sad but do touch my emotion very deeply...

However, as always your poem is just Excellent!!...

 

Hugs

Gee xx 

Comment By: FreeDeAnna on July 23, 2008 06:53:23 PM Report
Ahh Steve,

    You have hit another powerful emotion, with the almighty words.... my daughter shares this,as well

  with the others..waiting for him to to return..powerful write.....Hus, DeAnna

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on July 23, 2008 04:18:58 PM Report
Steve,
This hits close to home because one of my good friends is going through having to wait for

her new husband to come back from Iraq.
Bittersweet write,
~Tracie

Comment By: FreeAmy on July 23, 2008 03:54:11 PM Report
a sad poem and unfortunately what alot of people are going through right now.

good job of capturing the emotions of those left behind and putting them into words.

~Amy

Comment By: FreeCathy on July 23, 2008 03:04:41 PM Report
Love it very sad poem with hope and love Excellent
........Cathy

Comment By: FreeAdri on July 23, 2008 02:06:11 PM Report
Sad and uplifting write.
Beautiful Steve. 
Adri x





 


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