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Author Name: Freequeens1 3 Comments
Date Added: July 26, 2008 03:07:16 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Trust

I let my hand rest

In the palm of your hand

With complete trust,

You won’t crush the butterfly

That is my free spirit.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Author's Notes:
My try at a Tanka form.  The modern version doesn't have to have the 5-7-5-7-7 syllable count.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on August 9, 2008 08:42:27 PM Report
A butterfly is a wonderful way to visualize trust..It is a delicate creature, so easily destroyed...len
Comment By: FreeTina Steele on July 26, 2008 02:58:13 PM Report
this poem is short and straight to the point. you are a very talented writer-keep it up!
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 26, 2008 02:06:51 PM Report
Wow I love this... How amazing the words you write...
 ~ She Whispers





 


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