| Comment By: Cathy on July 31, 2008 11:39:25 AM
|Loved this read just hope everything is ok |
Heartbroken moon is out of sight now
only a black stillness ground
Endless clouds dominate the weeping sky
even the loyal night birds song start to cry
Such beauty yet such sadness in these amazing words
| Comment By: S on July 29, 2008 06:57:05 PM
|incriminating wine... i like that |
| Comment By: Dan on July 28, 2008 10:30:14 PM
This is an excellent poem, very raw and filled with emotion. Loved every word, so much is felt in this write.
| Comment By: Harold Ham McLelland on July 28, 2008 08:07:02 PM
Wonderful flow She!!!
I'll have you know, I've put in a "Special Order" for a star filled Texas sky...
And you night song birds had better tune those chirping beaks!!!
Because She Whispers requires a grand performance!!!
You know that you are loved by your poetic family!!!
| Comment By: Amy on July 28, 2008 04:16:27 PM
A very moving piece but I too hope everything is OK with you, India. Chin up, hon.
| Comment By: tom on July 28, 2008 02:03:22 PM
sad but beautifully written poem I hope that everything is ok
| Comment By: Angel on July 28, 2008 10:53:26 AM
So very painful She. Hope you are ok love? Beautiful yet sad poem
| Comment By: Gee on July 28, 2008 10:50:01 AM
This is another Beautiful poem from you...
| Comment By: Alison Storm Wolf on July 28, 2008 09:49:59 AM
Oh dear my spirit sis..don't know what has befallen you but it sure has given voice the the most sublime poem...
All diamond stars have fallen on Texas
without a single crashing sound
having seen the Texas starry sky for myself I was instantly transported back there.......so beautiful