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Author Name: Freejohncarter 4 Comments
Date Added: August 08, 2008 12:08:10 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Wasted
 
 

 

 

 

There are no more words
I emptied the pool in my extravagance
I wasted choice and chose
The words that best suited my heart
A simple dream lost in confusion
A heart looking for reason
On the warmest sunny day
A teardrop wasted
On a cold and windy day.

 

 

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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on August 8, 2008 05:43:25 PM Report
The first two lines are my favorite in this interesting piece.

Linda

Comment By: FreeAdri on August 8, 2008 04:35:22 PM Report
Oh John, this is exquisite. Totally beautiful, soft and tender.
Truly a amazing piece.
Adri x

Comment By: FreeAngel on August 8, 2008 03:40:58 PM Report
Wonderful John maybe the right words were not spoken? teardrops used boxes of tissues as I am sure you have my dear friend. here grab a beer and a laugh hun ...than have another one ..

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeCathy on August 8, 2008 12:52:03 PM Report
Ahh this is so sweet and cute I just loved reading this Excellent write one which touched my heart for sure
.........hugs Cathy





 


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