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Author Name: Freeseeker 2 Comments
Date Added: August 09, 2008 17:08:14 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Double Take

Lonely is the heart beat
In search of itís Valentine
I wander darkening streets
A seeker

Will I find
Will I find

What it is Iím looking for
Or hope to see
In the azure skies above
The dawn

Wonít find me
Wonít find me

Eternity lurking in a doveís voice
An abyss seen in itís eyes
An angel hidden in shadow
Just listening

While my soul cries
While my soul cries

The path of the seeker
Always searching to find
While never seeing
The truth

A targetís aligned
A targetĎs aligned

ďStillness is the master of movementĒ
Emotion the master of me
Iíll always be pulled to find you
But wait

I finally see
I finally see

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Comment By: FreeAfsaneh on August 11, 2010 12:22:17 PM Report
Yes, the repetition really drives the point home.
Lovely piece of poetry
Comment By: FreeAmy on August 9, 2008 07:57:26 PM Report
I agree... the repition is effective. It's almost like a poem in a poem.

Nice job, Angel.



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