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Author Name: Freequeens1 3 Comments
Date Added: August 11, 2008 03:08:02 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Mysteries
Even though she could feel him in her sleep,
It was his love that he wanted to show.
When an angel breaks the rules, Heaven weeps.
It was not in Godís plan for her to know.
 
He could tell she was a sensitive soul
Because she was a lamb among the sheep.
He kept watch over her with eyes of coal
Even though she could feel him in her sleep.
 
He was mesmerized by her shining light
So, with each fleeting day his love did grow.
Thus, worried that he might give her a fright,
It was his love that he wanted to show.
 
He gave blood for just a moment with her,
As innocent as a chick when it peeps,
As surely as autumn makes leaves wither,
When an angel breaks the rules, Heaven weeps.
 
Because mankind was given finite time
Itís more precious than anything we sow,
Mysteries that make life simply sublime.
It was not in Godís plan for her to know.
Author's Notes:
This was written for a contest on allpoetry.com.  Inspired by the song from the movie "City of Angels" called "Iris" by the Goo Goo Dolls.  The song was written from the point of view of the Nicolas Cage character, the Angel.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on August 13, 2008 05:53:58 PM Report
Just lovely metering to a very tender write, kid. It's fun to read something with no awkward meter problems...Great stuff!...len
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 11, 2008 12:39:53 PM Report
Oh, I do love this amazing poem you write so lovely indeed...
 ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeAdri on August 11, 2008 04:11:36 AM Report
This is beautiful. That song has a special place because of the tragedy it explained in that pedicular movie, and it was SO sad.  Beautifully captured of emotions. 
Adri x





 


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