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Author Name: Freejohncarter 9 Comments
Date Added: August 16, 2008 00:08:25 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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A Wish

A Wish

 

I looked for love
It hides in shadows
Of broken promises
And forgotten yesterdays.
I welcomed your eyes
That bade me stay
In a wish
That was a lifetime away.
The only constant is the sea
Full of dreams of never be
Waves that crash upon a soul
On the sands of time
That made me whole.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeSteve on August 20, 2008 08:49:04 AM Report
Soft words become a chain of human emotion.  Well done John.
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on August 17, 2008 09:49:31 PM Report
This left me with a share of the heartache it is comprised of. Lovely expression John.

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeMary F. Charest on August 16, 2008 11:19:58 PM Report
Beautifully written and poignant.

Mary

Comment By: FreeAngel on August 16, 2008 01:37:27 PM Report
Wishes can sometimes come true my friend

 

Beautiful as always you write

Comment By: PremiumLindaM on August 16, 2008 01:36:20 PM Report
Excellent writing here John.
This one is really top notch.
Linda

Comment By: FreeCathy on August 16, 2008 12:43:35 PM Report
Absolutely beautiful just loved this love poem your words tend to wisp the reader away Excellent
........Cathy

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 16, 2008 09:06:53 AM Report
John,
 Hopeful wishes of your helpless heart
 Wishes that tear your suffering mind apart

 Wishes to hold what you want to embrace
 Wishes to love her and kiss her lovely face

Splashing  waves crash upon the lonely shore
 Wanting her to love you forever and more

 What can I say I was inspired!! (( Smilessss
 Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeAdri on August 16, 2008 07:41:44 AM Report
Beautiful as always John. Longing and wishful. I know that feeling.
Stunning John, something special.
Adri x

Comment By: Freeb doneff on August 16, 2008 07:39:58 AM Report
Beautiful. Man does not live by wishes alone. And woman, always prepares for change.
b xo





 


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