| Comment By: Steve on August 20, 2008 08:49:04 AM
|Soft words become a chain of human emotion. Well done John. |
| Comment By: Barbara Demasson on August 17, 2008 09:49:31 PM
This left me with a share of the heartache it is comprised of. Lovely expression John.
| Comment By: Mary F. Charest on August 16, 2008 11:19:58 PM
Beautifully written and poignant.
| Comment By: Angel on August 16, 2008 01:37:27 PM
Wishes can sometimes come true my friend
Beautiful as always you write
| Comment By: LindaM on August 16, 2008 01:36:20 PM
Excellent writing here John.
This one is really top notch.
| Comment By: Cathy on August 16, 2008 12:43:35 PM
|Absolutely beautiful just loved this love poem your words tend to wisp the reader away Excellent |
| Comment By: She Whispers on August 16, 2008 09:06:53 AM
Hopeful wishes of your helpless heart
Wishes that tear your suffering mind apart
Wishes to hold what you want to embrace
Wishes to love her and kiss her lovely face
Splashing waves crash upon the lonely shore
Wanting her to love you forever and more
What can I say I was inspired!! (( Smilessss
Hugs ~ She Whispers
| Comment By: Adri on August 16, 2008 07:41:44 AM
Beautiful as always John. Longing and wishful. I know that feeling.
Stunning John, something special.
| Comment By: b doneff on August 16, 2008 07:39:58 AM
|Beautiful. Man does not live by wishes alone. And woman, always prepares for change. |