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Author Name: Freejohncarter 7 Comments
Date Added: August 20, 2008 16:08:32 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Why do these thoughts linger
Persistent just like an index finger
Mediocre a face within a window
Could never touch your lips.
I chased you, the time I borrowed
We were at one in that hollow
We were innocent and lost
Your perfume, was my cost
We were flustered
By this love’s surprise.


Author's Notes:
The words i had were. Persistant, Mediocre, hollow, innocent, flustered,surprise.
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Comment By: FreeAngel on August 24, 2008 03:27:42 PM Report
Good stuff John great word bank enjoyed this
Comment By: FreeSteve on August 21, 2008 11:10:42 AM Report
Well done John !
Comment By: Freeb doneff on August 21, 2008 07:20:42 AM Report
Wordbanks are very good to get the old writing juices flowing. Or, overflowing, (with ability) as we see here..sigh...could you post a bad one, just once? lolol..

Comment By: FreeAdri on August 21, 2008 03:42:37 AM Report
Brilliant job!  As always, a piece of artwork! 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on August 21, 2008 01:57:12 AM Report
You could make something out of absolutely John...sweet work! =))



Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 20, 2008 10:37:00 PM Report
 This is amazing as always... Great job..
  Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeCathy on August 20, 2008 05:51:44 PM Report
I agree with Kaitlyn you did a suberb job with those words Excellent John really loved reading this..


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