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Author Name: Freejohncarter 5 Comments
Date Added: August 29, 2008 16:08:49 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Just some words

Just some words

 

I dreamt of you
Fell into a shadow that haunts me
I see your face in every place
I hide the night that taunts me.
 
Why place your love before me
Why do I have this dream
How can this empty night
Become the dream I scheme.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAdri on September 1, 2008 01:53:33 AM Report
I agree with Jolen, you sometimes have to grab it with both hands to have it, and make the dream reality.  Beautiful John, haunting and searching.
Adri x

Comment By: FreeAngel on August 30, 2008 10:36:20 AM Report
Words that turn into dreams and the lonely night is empty..

 

Excellent John

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeGee on August 30, 2008 07:31:09 AM Report
John..wonderful write but I do feel the sadness in this simple words from you....
Hugs
Gee xx

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 29, 2008 05:53:30 PM Report
Sir John,
 Just words ... Can say so much  in a poem that the  lips are so afraid to say....
 Just words written from a romantic poet about life and love with so much passion to have it all the happiness with the tears ...

Just Words

 How they haunt our wishful dreams
 At least in our dreams we embrace the one we really want and kiss the lips that will melt with a blaze that never dies...
 Simply beautiful words...
I see a poem in my eyes..soon I will post..
You inspire me once again... Your fault (( Smiles...
 Hugs ~ She Whispers


Comment By: FreeSteve on August 29, 2008 04:45:08 PM Report
Romantic indeed John.




 


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