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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 4 Comments
Date Added: September 01, 2008 08:09:15 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Captured By Loneliness ~*~Co- Written With John Carter
Captured By Loneliness
I looked for something
But her eyes were taken  
Each night swallowing silent tears that wept
listening  to emptiness in which
visual shadows crept
 Captured by my own loneliness
In a night of the unforsaken.
In my mind I held this lovely flower
It spoke to my heart and whispered

My lips although silent were whispering love
to her for embracing hours
Dreams visions in my wishful mind
sighing thoughts towers

She looked at my exhausted unhappy face
which bore my past life of unhappiness 

Silent eternity alone with suffering anguish
my tormenting heart now
is slowly breaking
My loving heart sad by plagued hopes
now flees by the changing love wind
which were suddenly taken


I am captured by my night loneliness
 Stay with me until dawning morning
Or leave me bended torn and twisted.
Author's Notes:

 Well here we are writing together  again......John ..
It has been a while since we have put a poem together  this was a challenge
as always I enjoy writing with others writers with that gift to write...
 Thank you for this honor and pleasure.... Johns  poetic words are in Blue

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Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on September 1, 2008 03:07:23 PM Report
Emotive! Kudos to both of you! =))



Comment By: FreeAngel on September 1, 2008 02:01:24 PM Report
A most beautiful and so fragile piece of poetry. You write so well together. The two people I adore this was wonderful


Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeGee on September 1, 2008 10:42:47 AM Report
Excellent Write...
I am out of words when two great writers meet...
Hugs and love to you both,
Gee xxx

Comment By: FreeCeeCee on September 1, 2008 10:09:16 AM Report
Nice writing!




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