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Author Name: Freemaybememories 5 Comments
Date Added: September 02, 2008 14:09:25 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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the birds and the bees
I used to fear tomorrow never knowing what the day would bring
Till I met you and it was as if a caged bird was finally able to sing
I was so used to the back and forth it was like my life was a swing
But you make me feel like I could fly even without wings
You keep my heart buzzing, I'll be the nectar to which you cling
Even knowing about bees can't stop me from risking your sting
Because I never want to go back to when my life was in a sling
You took off my casted heart when I felt I'd never be recovering
I promise my love we'll fly off like doves if you keep me hovering
All I want in this world is you and I don't care about any other thing
For you have given me the most beautiful gift, your soul with no covering

Because at a time when I thought I would only continue suffering
You made me believe in love when I was convinced there wasn't such a thing
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJuliet The Harlot on December 13, 2008 05:45:59 PM Report

Awww. So sweet!


Comment By: FreeCathy on September 7, 2008 10:41:02 AM Report
WOW this is absolute a perfect love poem just wisped me away touching my heart and soul. your words so powerful to those who read Excellent and perfect in every word of this!!!!!!!
......Cathy

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 2, 2008 08:47:31 PM Report
Excellant poem all about the birds and bees... your style is amazing my friend
~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeRachel on September 2, 2008 04:51:43 PM Report
This is so wonderful, I love the revamping of the birds and the bees. It is amazing how you can use and keep an extended metaphor and also how you make it work in ways no one else would think of.

<3 Rachel

Comment By: PremiumRaymond Pinsonneault on September 2, 2008 03:08:47 PM Report
Beautiful modernization of the old "Birds & Bees" I learned, though the essence is still the same today. Loved the rhymne, rhythm and balance,  3 things I look for in
an enjoyable read. Keep-em coming, I'll be looking.
You have brightened my  " Lovejoy "





 


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