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Author Name: Freemaybememories 8 Comments
Date Added: October 23, 2008 12:10:19 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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ever so sweet
Her kisses filled my mouth and I thought love tasted so sweet
Forgetting that too much of a good thing isn't always a treat
Because it was love that dug a hole deep in my heart like a cavity
And I'll always be pulled back to that emotion unable to escape its gravity
Another love might fill that hole, but the tooth will never be the same
Scarred forever from that drill, it remains forever changed
And for every lie you heard from them, and for every girl you blamed jealousy
I wish I could take it all back, but the lost of faith shows us it wasn't meant to be
I guess it's just a lesson to me to always be careful what you eat
But I just want to tell that candied apple she was wrong about teeth

If love leaves your heart bitter then why do we always reach again for its place?
Because even when it leaves you soured, you never forget the sweetness of that taste



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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAmy on April 17, 2009 12:50:57 AM Report
Stunning...You should enter this one for a Feature.. I like the dental metaphors and I especially like the last 4 lines.

~Amy

Comment By: FreeJanice Herzog on February 4, 2009 02:43:10 PM Report
Dear maybememories:  This is really too sweet.  I liked it a lot.  Love, Janjan xoxo
Comment By: FreeRachel on November 4, 2008 06:23:17 PM Report
have i told you, you were amazing lately? if i haven't i'm sorry because you definetly are and so is your poetry, it is after all a reflection of you hahaha. great write.
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on October 30, 2008 09:09:36 AM Report

Wonderful lines throughout this one .


Fletch


Comment By: FreeA.P. on October 29, 2008 06:34:57 PM Report
great metaphors running through this piece!  and i use the word running, because i always feel my eyes racing along with your words in your writing, it seems to flow and flow along, effortlessly.  you seem to have an unlimited ability to write these rhymes...
i enjoyed, take care

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on October 24, 2008 06:22:04 PM Report
A fine and sensitive write, buddy...Well done!..len
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 24, 2008 10:27:52 AM Report
You always deliver yourself so well in poetic  lines...
 ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeJustine on October 23, 2008 08:06:11 PM Report
this is a really great poem!!! i love it.




 


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