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Author Name: Freepenfold18 13 Comments
Date Added: September 20, 2008 05:09:51 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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In The Darkness Of The Night
The eyes they glowed like embers
In the darkness of the night
His teeth were sharp as razors
So very long, so very white
His hair was grey and sallow
Like some remnant from the past
His movement slow and treacherous
No shadow did he cast
Nothing would deter him
On this his chosen path
And as he moved towards me
Would this breath become my last
The smell then fell upon me
As a shroud  about my head
Then a strangled cry escaped me
Yet not a word he said
As he slunk back in the darkness
There was no turning back
Then he padded down the stairway
To curl up on the mat.
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Comments:
Comment By: Freepaul holmes on January 22, 2010 03:58:52 AM Report
He-he. Wickedly suspenseful! Well written poem.
Comment By: FreeLubaina on October 18, 2008 04:35:33 PM Report
Very perceptive and full of deep and hidden meaning. 

It reads smoothly and gives you something to think about. 
Lubs.

Comment By: FreeGlata on September 24, 2008 01:50:04 PM Report
Whoa!!! You had me going here! LOVED this!! Meow...(hehehe)

I was expecting something like a vampire...this is great!

Hugs to ya.....Glata

Comment By: FreeCathy on September 20, 2008 04:06:24 PM Report
My heart beat finally slowing down, you sure had me waiting in anticipation and fear waiting for the jumping moment right till the end lol I really love this.   Excellent write filled such anticipation and a surprise ending perfectly done!!!!!
........hugs Cathy

Comment By: FreeAngel on September 20, 2008 03:06:27 PM Report
Sent shivers down me Graham and it as just a pussy lol brilliant

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeMoonStar on September 20, 2008 02:22:32 PM Report
Wonderful write.. Had me going all the way till the end!

Excellent style, among all else....

 

 

 

MoonStar

Comment By: FreeMoonStar on September 20, 2008 02:21:26 PM Report

Comment By: FreeWide Awake on September 20, 2008 11:33:58 AM Report
LOL

Brilliantly constructed Graham!
You really had me, and my son too, going right up to that last line! :o)

Well done, great ambience...very clever my friend.

Hugs,
Pamela

Comment By: Freenoah count on September 20, 2008 11:03:37 AM Report
We cat lovers.  Nicely done
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on September 20, 2008 11:02:49 AM Report
hehe good twist at the end

Ali x

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 20, 2008 09:09:49 AM Report
Brave...Brave...I stand clapping...
This is a Masterpiece!! ***** 
 My heart was pounding and chills down my spine God You had me going!! The Monster was just your  Cat !!  Your brilliant my friend...
I have read ever poem you have posted
and I want more...more ...
Your loyal friend and Fan..
Love ~ She Whispers ( Scarlett

Comment By: Premiumjohn j. carey on September 20, 2008 08:53:14 AM Report
graham, one word" WOW"     john
Comment By: FreeGee on September 20, 2008 08:00:36 AM Report
Graham,
Great write as always...
Gee xxx





 


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